Sweet Dark Kiss

'Tis told by those wiser than me
In crisis, freak feelings some see
When scent of death is all around
One's primal pulse does start to pound
Songs sing of outrageous empathy
Crossing all history's epic sea

Death's husky breath whisks one's skin
Like siren calls, invites one in
Lures the wandering and unsure
Whispers through the night endure
Soft, moist lips touch the idle soul
Lean close in and taste blackest coal

Darkness reigns on the killing field
Minds bend to think that they must yield
The loss of light we all lament
Greatness gone and good deeds misspent
Innocents hurt, self-inflicted
Hope grows as the dirge is lifted

Some seek to kiss eternity
See kernels of humanity
Yet many choose to take to flight
Flee from ever-revolving light
Serenely let one freely fly
To thrive anew beyond the sky

Be aware that time knows no tide
As dark draws in, set it aside
What trait makes night prosper in us
Death's embrace we fear to discuss
Will life's sweetest kiss be for all
A dark abyss in which we fall
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 11/23/2020 3:40:00 PM
Greg, congratulations on your great win in the contest with this wonderful write _Constance
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Greg Gaul
Date: 11/23/2020 4:25:00 PM
It's always so validating when accomplished poets like yourself take a moment to visit. Thank you.
Date: 11/22/2020 3:41:00 PM
Congratulations! Well done!
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Greg Gaul
Date: 11/22/2020 6:59:00 PM
Always delighted when you visit. Thanks so much for commenting.
Date: 11/22/2020 2:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement.
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Date: 11/22/2020 12:20:00 PM
CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Greg. Vividly descriptive! Janice
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Date: 11/22/2020 8:16:00 AM
Very nice Greg! Love "...To thrive anew beyond the sky..." Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Greg Gaul
Date: 11/22/2020 7:08:00 PM
Linda, how kind of you to comment. Most appreciated. Many thanks.
Date: 5/1/2020 2:49:00 PM
Wonderful write, Greg. A wowser! Panagiota xx PS I don't fear Deaths embrace. Gee, we could die from anything. Car crash, hit your Head on a rock. Fed up with fear of this flu. )))) moved past it! News today is nothing but death~ it's so fun to be scared for some.)))
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Greg Gaul
Date: 5/1/2020 3:38:00 PM
You are so right. This is serious stuff. Thank you for your comments and support. Appreciate your visits and thoughts.
Date: 5/1/2020 10:07:00 AM
We all fear, Death's embrace.. we should embrace it if our time is close for heaven with open arms. But, know with the virus it's like being in the lions den. Very good write with great imagery, Greg.
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Greg Gaul
Date: 5/1/2020 2:51:00 PM
I kept thinking of that female doctor who committed suicide. How she fell into death. The virus has done this. Eve, thank you for your kind comments and and insights.
Date: 5/1/2020 9:24:00 AM
"Death's embrace we fear to discuss" and yet death is just a transition from this existence to the next. Nicely penned Greg. John
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Date: 5/1/2020 2:54:00 PM
John, I agree wholeheartedly with you transition comment. Thank you for your visit and I'm admiring your recent work very much.
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