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Sweet Dark Kiss

'Tis told by those wiser than me In crisis, freak feelings some see When scent of death is all around One's primal pulse does start to pound Songs sing of outrageous empathy Crossing all history's epic sea Death's husky breath whisks one's skin Like siren calls, invites one in Lures the wandering and unsure Whispers through the night endure Soft, moist lips touch the idle soul Lean close in and taste blackest coal Darkness reigns on the killing field Minds bend to think that they must yield The loss of light we all lament Greatness gone and good deeds misspent Innocents hurt, self-inflicted Hope grows as the dirge is lifted Some seek to kiss eternity See kernels of humanity Yet many choose to take to flight Flee from ever-revolving light Serenely let one freely fly To thrive anew beyond the sky Be aware that time knows no tide As dark draws in, set it aside What trait makes night prosper in us Death's embrace we fear to discuss Will life's sweetest kiss be for all A dark abyss in which we fall

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Date: 11/23/2020 3:40:00 PM
Greg, congratulations on your great win in the contest with this wonderful write _Constance
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Greg Gaul
Date: 11/23/2020 4:25:00 PM
It's always so validating when accomplished poets like yourself take a moment to visit. Thank you.
Date: 11/22/2020 3:41:00 PM
Congratulations! Well done!
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Greg Gaul
Date: 11/22/2020 6:59:00 PM
Always delighted when you visit. Thanks so much for commenting.
Date: 11/22/2020 2:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement.
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Date: 11/22/2020 12:20:00 PM
CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Greg. Vividly descriptive! Janice
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Date: 11/22/2020 8:16:00 AM
Very nice Greg! Love "...To thrive anew beyond the sky..." Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Greg Gaul
Date: 11/22/2020 7:08:00 PM
Linda, how kind of you to comment. Most appreciated. Many thanks.
Date: 5/1/2020 2:49:00 PM
Wonderful write, Greg. A wowser! Panagiota xx PS I don't fear Deaths embrace. Gee, we could die from anything. Car crash, hit your Head on a rock. Fed up with fear of this flu. )))) moved past it! News today is nothing but death~ it's so fun to be scared for some.)))
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Greg Gaul
Date: 5/1/2020 3:38:00 PM
You are so right. This is serious stuff. Thank you for your comments and support. Appreciate your visits and thoughts.
Date: 5/1/2020 10:07:00 AM
We all fear, Death's embrace.. we should embrace it if our time is close for heaven with open arms. But, know with the virus it's like being in the lions den. Very good write with great imagery, Greg.
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Greg Gaul
Date: 5/1/2020 2:51:00 PM
I kept thinking of that female doctor who committed suicide. How she fell into death. The virus has done this. Eve, thank you for your kind comments and and insights.
Date: 5/1/2020 9:24:00 AM
"Death's embrace we fear to discuss" and yet death is just a transition from this existence to the next. Nicely penned Greg. John
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Greg Gaul
Date: 5/1/2020 2:54:00 PM
John, I agree wholeheartedly with you transition comment. Thank you for your visit and I'm admiring your recent work very much.

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