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Sweet Cravings

Binging and overindulging with chocolate after a hectic day at work Eating more than ten fun size chocolate candies without any pause Risking the glucose levels of blood to rise to a higher unhealthy level Affecting the progress made with nutrition modification and exercise Fruits are now an essential element in the daily food requirements Keeping at bay the sugar cravings that add pounds to the waist Eating more healthy, the overall health improves dramatically Achieving a transformed new body and a clean bill of health For Its Time To Fess Up Poetry Contest Sponsored by Lin Lane Seventh Place 2-22-16

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Date: 3/22/2016 8:17:00 AM
That's a really unique take on the contest. We also need to make amends with our bodies, as far as health is concerned... Congrats Nayda, for your WIN in the contest!!! ;-)
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/22/2016 1:30:00 PM
Thank you Teddy
Date: 3/21/2016 11:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Creative and educational.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/22/2016 6:46:00 AM
Thank you Susan
Date: 3/20/2016 9:01:00 PM
Not just a good poem, enlightening as well. Congrats for the placement...
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/20/2016 9:14:00 PM
Thank you Probir
Date: 3/20/2016 5:18:00 PM
Nayda, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/20/2016 9:15:00 PM
Thank you Laura
Date: 3/20/2016 4:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement, Nayda. I have such a weakness for chocolate.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/20/2016 9:15:00 PM
Thank you Lin. Chocolate is my favorite sweet

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