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Sweet Cherry Wine

Sweet Cherry Wine

get out of my car
friendless marching out to war
where's the nearest bar

     2019 August 31     

*1st Place*

Sing Me A Senryu
~~Maureen McGreavy

Sweet Cherry Wine - Tommy James and the Shondells (1969) w/lyrics

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Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 5/22/2020 1:56:00 PM Hello William Kekaula, you probably have to walk very far to get to the bar, Enjoy your day my friend. Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 5/25/2020 7:07:00 PM You are so welcomed. We had a day of summer weather. I was outside most of the day, enjoying the weather. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy yur evening my fiend. Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 5/24/2020 9:18:00 AM Hello William kekaula, Aloha- I hope you are well. Keep well my friend. Aloha! Hilo Poet Date: 5/22/2020 3:36:00 PM Thank you, kind-hearted Darlene, Aloha~@wk

James Inman Date: 10/5/2019 8:36:00 AM Clever write William. Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 10/5/2019 9:23:00 AM My many thanks indeed ~ Aloha always William

Constance La France Date: 10/3/2019 5:09:00 PM William congratulations on your win in the contest! Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 10/3/2019 5:53:00 PM Thanks Constance ~ Aloha always William

Line Gauthier Date: 10/3/2019 4:20:00 PM Congrats on your top win, William. Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 10/3/2019 4:27:00 PM Thanks, Line! ~ Aloha always William

Jeanne Mcgee Date: 10/3/2019 2:04:00 PM One of my favorite songs...such a great senryu for it. Congratulations on the top spot. Love. Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 10/3/2019 2:05:00 PM Much too kind Jeanne ~ Aloha always William

Paul Callus Date: 10/3/2019 1:48:00 PM Striking and expressive, William. Congratulations on placing first! Lovely trophy :) Regards // paul Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 10/3/2019 2:00:00 PM My appreciation Paul ~ Aloha always William

Anisha Dutta Date: 10/3/2019 11:38:00 AM BIG CONGRATS TO WIN TOP. Blessing Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 10/3/2019 12:57:00 PM Thanks my friend ~ Aloha always William

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 10/3/2019 9:20:00 AM Congratulations on your top win in my Sing Me A Senryu contest William! This one sang to me, first read, and every read after. It conjures so much. Thank you! xomo Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 10/3/2019 1:00:00 PM Humbling my friend, one of my FAVE 'C' group, 'Cherry, Crystal, Crimson', MY MANY THANKS! ~ Aloha always William