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Sweet Cherry Wine

Sweet Cherry Wine get out of my car friendless marching out to war where's the nearest bar 2019 August 31 *1st Place* Sing Me A Senryu ~~Maureen McGreavy Sweet Cherry Wine - Tommy James and the Shondells (1969) w/lyrics

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/22/2020 1:56:00 PM

Hello William Kekaula, you probably have to walk very far to get to the bar, Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/25/2020 7:07:00 PM

You are so welcomed. We had a day of summer weather. I was outside most of the day, enjoying the weather. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy yur evening my fiend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/24/2020 9:18:00 AM

Hello William kekaula, Aloha- I hope you are well. Keep well my friend. Aloha!

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/22/2020 3:36:00 PM

Thank you, kind-hearted Darlene, Aloha~@wk

James Inman

Date: 10/5/2019 8:36:00 AM

Clever write William.

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/5/2019 9:23:00 AM

My many thanks indeed ~ Aloha always William

Constance La France

Date: 10/3/2019 5:09:00 PM

William congratulations on your win in the contest!

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/3/2019 5:53:00 PM

Thanks Constance ~ Aloha always William

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/3/2019 4:20:00 PM

Congrats on your top win, William.

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/3/2019 4:27:00 PM

Thanks, Line! ~ Aloha always William

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 10/3/2019 2:04:00 PM

One of my favorite songs...such a great senryu for it. Congratulations on the top spot. Love.

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/3/2019 2:05:00 PM

Much too kind Jeanne ~ Aloha always William

Paul Callus

Date: 10/3/2019 1:48:00 PM

Striking and expressive, William. Congratulations on placing first! Lovely trophy :) Regards // paul

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/3/2019 2:00:00 PM

My appreciation Paul ~ Aloha always William

Anisha Dutta

Date: 10/3/2019 11:38:00 AM

BIG CONGRATS TO WIN TOP. Blessing

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/3/2019 12:57:00 PM

Thanks my friend ~ Aloha always William

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 10/3/2019 9:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your top win in my Sing Me A Senryu contest William! This one sang to me, first read, and every read after. It conjures so much. Thank you! xomo

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/3/2019 1:00:00 PM

Humbling my friend, one of my FAVE 'C' group, 'Cherry, Crystal, Crimson', MY MANY THANKS! ~ Aloha always William