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Sweet Carmel

The taste of homemade Carmel so sweet/ everyone I know desires the treat. After one night in the kitchen covered/ half the pan gone, next morning discovered. Is it my beagle Lily whom loves any food? / she seems in a hyper beagle mood. I know I heard a squeak in the night / a dream ? No, for low was the kitchen light. T'was my husband, for he can't resist/ soft , buttered brown sugar , a Vanilla twist.

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Skat A

Date: 11/7/2013 11:59:00 AM

Hi Shanity *nice* SWEET Or SALTY win................... HUGS ~SKAT~

Shanity Rain
Date: 11/7/2013 4:21:00 PM

Thank-you , I love your beautiful profile picture !

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/6/2013 7:26:00 PM

Shanity, Congratulations On your way to xool Sweet & Sour win... always~ Linda aka PD

Shanity Rain
Date: 11/7/2013 4:24:00 PM

Thank-you !! I believe have the recipe by now. you will love it !

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/6/2013 11:32:00 AM

happy cheers to you for your win, shanity!..:) huggs

Shanity Rain
Date: 11/7/2013 4:23:00 PM

Thank-you Nette , I have been so distracted with my very 1st book "legalized Kidnapping " Oh My !

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/6/2013 8:56:00 AM

Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara

Shanity Rain
Date: 11/7/2013 4:22:00 PM

Thank-you my Inspiration and muse ! Love , Shanity!

Donna Jones

Date: 11/5/2013 10:57:00 AM

Yummy...shame on hubby..:-) congratulations

Shanity Rain
Date: 11/5/2013 1:42:00 PM

Thanks !! we are all winners !! I will post the recipe on 'about the poem ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/5/2013 7:59:00 AM

a cute way to talk about your homemade caramel. Congrats for your win, sweetie!!

Shanity Rain
Date: 11/5/2013 1:41:00 PM

Thank-you ! check mail ~~

Monterey Sirak

Date: 10/25/2013 8:36:00 AM

Now this is a poem you can taste!

Shanity Rain
Date: 10/25/2013 11:49:00 AM

Thank-you my friend , this weekend , I will do my best to catch up on your poems ! and many others .. It is hard , I want to write , I want to read ? The life of a Poetess ~ and still, have a hard time calling myself that!

Dan Kearley

Date: 10/24/2013 5:08:00 PM

Very sweet! :o) Now you got me wanting one of those... So I see you changed your name? I was wondering where you went?

Shanity Rain
Date: 10/25/2013 11:47:00 AM

Yes ! very excellent Carmel, you will be addicted ~ I was wondering where you went ? I don't want to play favoritism , but did a poem in your contest .. so I have not contacted you , I changed my name for reasons not vain !!

Honestly J.T.

Date: 10/24/2013 12:30:00 PM

Werther's is my favorite. Perhaps you could give them a run for their money. Good poem

Shanity Rain
Date: 10/24/2013 2:07:00 PM

yes , when I get a chance , I will e-mail you the easiest recipe, you will never buy those again !

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/24/2013 10:26:00 AM

- I'd like to try ..... I will come with the first plane - A sweet and nice poem, Shanity !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shanity Rain
Date: 10/24/2013 10:36:00 AM

Thank-you ! Driving myself to write a different form ! For the 1st time ~