Shanity Rain Poet Couplet

Sweet Carmel

The taste of homemade Carmel so sweet/ everyone I know desires the treat.

After one night in the kitchen covered/ half the pan gone, next morning discovered. 

 Is it my beagle Lily whom loves any food? / she seems in a hyper beagle mood.

 I know I heard a squeak in the night / a dream ? No, for low was the kitchen light.
           
 T'was my husband, for he can't resist/ soft , buttered brown sugar , a Vanilla twist.

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Skat A November 7, 2013 at 11:59 AM Hi Shanity *nice* SWEET Or SALTY win................... HUGS ~SKAT~ Shanity Rain November 7, 2013 at 4:21 PM Thank-you , I love your beautiful profile picture !

Poet Destroyer A November 6, 2013 at 7:26 PM Shanity, Congratulations On your way to xool Sweet & Sour win... always~ Linda aka PD Shanity Rain November 7, 2013 at 4:24 PM Thank-you !! I believe have the recipe by now. you will love it !

Nette Onclaud November 6, 2013 at 11:32 AM happy cheers to you for your win, shanity!..:) huggs Shanity Rain November 7, 2013 at 4:23 PM Thank-you Nette , I have been so distracted with my very 1st book "legalized Kidnapping " Oh My !

Sara Kendrick November 6, 2013 at 8:56 AM Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara Shanity Rain November 7, 2013 at 4:22 PM Thank-you my Inspiration and muse ! Love , Shanity!

Donna Jones November 5, 2013 at 10:57 AM Yummy...shame on hubby..:-) congratulations Shanity Rain November 5, 2013 at 1:42 PM Thanks !! we are all winners !! I will post the recipe on 'about the poem ~

Andrea Dietrich November 5, 2013 at 7:59 AM a cute way to talk about your homemade caramel. Congrats for your win, sweetie!! Shanity Rain November 5, 2013 at 1:41 PM Thank-you ! check mail ~~

Monterey Sirak October 25, 2013 at 8:36 AM Now this is a poem you can taste! Shanity Rain October 25, 2013 at 11:49 AM Thank-you my friend , this weekend , I will do my best to catch up on your poems ! and many others .. It is hard , I want to write , I want to read ? The life of a Poetess ~ and still, have a hard time calling myself that!

Dan Kearley October 24, 2013 at 5:08 PM Very sweet! :o) Now you got me wanting one of those... So I see you changed your name? I was wondering where you went? Shanity Rain October 25, 2013 at 11:47 AM Yes ! very excellent Carmel, you will be addicted ~ I was wondering where you went ? I don't want to play favoritism , but did a poem in your contest .. so I have not contacted you , I changed my name for reasons not vain !!

Honestly J.T. October 24, 2013 at 12:30 PM Werther's is my favorite. Perhaps you could give them a run for their money. Good poem Shanity Rain October 24, 2013 at 2:07 PM yes , when I get a chance , I will e-mail you the easiest recipe, you will never buy those again !

Anne-Lise Andresen October 24, 2013 at 10:26 AM - I'd like to try ..... I will come   with the first plane - A sweet and nice poem, Shanity !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Shanity Rain October 24, 2013 at 10:36 AM Thank-you ! Driving myself to write a different form ! For the 1st time ~