Sweet Butterfly

Sweet Butterfly, with wings now dry 'tis time to break away
and light upon the leaves of dawn while weeping willows sway,
not reminisce 'bout chrysalis discarded yesterday,
but treasure life, with colors rife in nature's cabaret.

Sweet Butterfly, you sometimes sigh "terrene so strange and new”,
but take a chance, with winged expanse of fairy-like bijou, 
to taste delight in random flight, to drift beyond the blue
and then collect her naked nectar, sipped in morning dew. 

Sweet Butterfly, you question why the breeze is seldom soft
when swirling you, your wings askew, while floating free aloft.
Some seem to find their peace of mind believing gods have coughed,
but others, downed, have often found more freedom when they've scoffed.

Sweet Butterfly, you needn't cry, the fields are full of clover,
and meadowlands bare braided strands that winds in waves flow over -
but if you fear that, more than here, another mead is mauver,
just flutter by, beneath the sky, unfettered flitting rover.

Sweet Butterfly, farewell, goodbye, you've left this world behind.
I oft gaze back along the track of flowers that you've mined
recalling days of light sashays and movements unconfined
that complement the firmament where beauty lies enshrined.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gauthier Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 5:58 PM
What a delightful tribute to the short lifespan of the delicate butterfly who needn't "reminisce 'bout chrysalis discarded yesterday". Fabulous penning, Terry. A FAVE for me ~ so glad that this beautiful poem is featured in the 2020 PS Anthology ~
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December 28, 2017 at 5:42 PM
This is exquisite, Terry, and you are on another level, Sir ... sad thing is that I don't think you frequent the soup anymore. Wherever you've gone off to, I pray you are alright, and that somehow you receive this comment, and the knowledge that you have affected THIS newbie very deeply, and given me something to shoot for. Thank you for sharing your extraordinary creative acumen - blessings, Dear Poet!
Martin Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 12:44 PM
Never thought of insects mining flowers. Great poetry! Congratulations Terry! :-)
La France Avatar
February 11, 2017 at 7:51 PM
Terry congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful write ~
Lamoureux Avatar
December 19, 2015 at 8:48 AM
I agree with Joe, this is beautiful. Congratulations.
A. Sharma Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 11:09 PM
Wow great take with this lovely poem Terry.. Congrats on big win!
Maverick Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 3:17 PM
Hi Terry, I must say great result here, and wonderful wording, I would not have been surprised; had it got a higher spot.'
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December 18, 2015 at 1:52 AM
TERRY, Congratulations on your wonderful butterfly win. Love LINDA
Wigley Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 12:29 AM
This is lovely, Terry. I'd have placed it much higher. Well done. Regards,mViv
A  Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 7:27 PM
TERRY, I'm impressed, I guess men can write about any given theme. Thank you for supporting my contest. It was a delight to host. I'm still smiling after reading and closing and posting my new blog. Congratulations on your AWESOME WIN... Stop by my latest Blog "I GUESS THEY CAN... HOW ABOUT IT LADIES???" help celebrate and tell me why you decided to join THIS contest. Looking forward in hearing from you. Love SKAT
Negron Flores Avatar
November 6, 2015 at 7:13 AM
Excellent rhyme poem. Great tribute to butterflies.
Laurie Avatar
January 11, 2015 at 4:30 PM
G'day Terry... A real pleasure to read your work. Beautifully crafted all of it. Regards Lindsay
Williams Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 4:30 PM
Wow Terry, what a lovely poem. WE both write in a very similar style. I am going to read more of your poems. Very, very nice. Kind regards---John from Australia
Callus Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 2:40 PM
This is one of the best poems I've read today; remarkable how a small insect can inspire such beauty in writing. Enjoyed the flow and rhyme, too. #7 // paul
Bear Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 1:04 PM
So very well crafted. One can feel that we are one with the butterfly. Blessings Edith
Riley Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 10:30 AM
Wonderfully written. The rhyming is top notch. Well Done Terry.....
Fraser Avatar
October 22, 2014 at 2:46 PM
Beautiful poetry, and the rhyming is wonderful Terry, James.......
Petersen Potter Avatar
October 2, 2014 at 6:21 PM
I love butterflies so delicate and soft! Liked your verses and rhyme Terry! Cheers! xxxxx D.
Lindley Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 1:25 PM
A pleasure to read this fine poem. The rhyming is superb .. Rating this a super 7 and think it deserves a 10 myself.
Corbin Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 2:49 PM
What a fantastic poem! You have such a good ear for rhyme, Terry. That's not easy. Well done. Jim
O'Leary Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 1:39 PM
Thank you, Jim... Your praise overwhelms... ;-))
Donnelly Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 6:54 PM
Beautifully written! Love the "poetic rhythmic flow"... painting images as you go. :) <3
O'Leary Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 1:36 PM
Thank you, Sharon... glad you enjoyed!
Kearley Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 4:57 PM
So glad to see you writing again Terry. Always a joy to read you fine works.
O'Leary Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 1:36 PM
Thank you, Dan.... you are always so kind...
Allison Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 4:21 PM
simply delightful with stunning imagery:-) Hugs jan xxx
O'Leary Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 1:35 PM
Thank you, Jan...
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