Sweet Blue Rain

One day, if I could open my eyes
and watch you walkthrough
the sweet blue rain, and
wash those tears away.

If I could open my eyes, and
watch you wear
the same cotton blue jeans
with that cute white blouse, and
tell those clouds to splash
sweet blue rain, into your heart

The fresh scent
of sweet blue rain
bring April showers, and
flowers sell in the marketplace.

Well, a funny thing happened this Sunday,
on our walk-through of Palomino Park.
I noticed some things that you do
with your sweet blue smile.

Loving you may take some time.
Let’s take a walk again
and fill an empty heart,
with sweet blue rain.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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George   Avatar
January 24, 2009 at 7:06 AM
Hi Gregory, Congratulations on your feature of the week. Lainie
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January 22, 2009 at 12:52 PM
Congrats Gregory on "Sweet Blue Rain" being featured. Vince
Jordan Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 9:31 AM
Gregory - I just wanted to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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January 20, 2009 at 5:00 PM
Nice use of color and imagery to convey your thoughts. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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January 19, 2009 at 5:33 PM
What a lovely poem, so loving and well deserved to be featured this week! Well done!~ Carrie
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January 19, 2009 at 10:52 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. I know you will have many more. Love, Carol
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January 19, 2009 at 9:12 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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August 4, 2008 at 5:49 PM
I love your poems - seems we are on the same wave lengh.. Keep up the good work!
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