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Sweet Bliss - Collaboration With Brenda Chiri

You cast that spell you know so well
 Now my thoughts are only of you
 My passion's rising, can't you tell
 We'll blaze a fire at our rendezvous

 We'll share a warm, passionate embrace
 As the nectar of your flower I taste
 As our heartbeats start to race
 We'll ignite a fire in this place
 
 You're the one who threw in the magic
 My minds all over, it just can't rest
 To lose that passion would be tragic
 When we meet you'll have my very best

 Thoughts of your embrace keeps me warm
 As you taste with your passionate kiss
 Fast paced hearts can't do no harm
 I'm so hot from thoughts of this sweet bliss

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/1/2018 9:11:00 AM
A steamy collab ;) so so goooood, I sure did enjoy it. Actually I love it!
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Joseph May
Date: 1/1/2018 4:00:00 PM
Thank you Akkina...Happy New Year!
Date: 12/31/2017 10:33:00 PM
Loved to read such sensual and soft poems, what a great collab!!!
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Joseph May
Date: 1/1/2018 12:07:00 AM
Thank you Arthur...Happy New Year!
Date: 12/31/2017 3:11:00 PM
- A romantic collaboration, I enjoy reading this - Great, Joseph & Brenda -hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Joseph May
Date: 12/31/2017 6:11:00 PM
Thank you Anne ...Happy New Year!
Date: 12/31/2017 1:43:00 PM
A mighty fine collaboration you two! Love, passion and magic, is a triple header that warms the heart.. Great job my friends! A fav..
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Joseph May
Date: 12/31/2017 6:12:00 PM
Thank you Robert...Happy New Year!
Date: 12/31/2017 8:32:00 AM
A smooth collaboration filled with passion. Congratulations to the both of you :)
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Joseph May
Date: 12/31/2017 6:10:00 PM
Thank you Heidi..Happy New Year!
Date: 12/31/2017 8:22:00 AM
Very romantic poem, Joseph..the verses flow with anticipation and passion..the sweet bliss!
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Joseph May
Date: 12/31/2017 6:09:00 PM
Thank you Vijay ...Happy New Year!
Date: 12/31/2017 6:17:00 AM
Lovely poem Joseph, great collaboration... Lots of steamy imagery in this one..
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Joseph May
Date: 12/31/2017 6:08:00 PM
Thank you Silent..Happy New Year!
Date: 12/31/2017 5:38:00 AM
Joseph...I commented on Brendas as well but I wanted to stop in and say "hot!"
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Joseph May
Date: 12/31/2017 6:08:00 PM
Thank you Rhoda..Happy New Year
Date: 12/31/2017 2:59:00 AM
A marvelous collaboration Jospeh and Brenda, such beautiful passionate imagery. I love the way the poem flows and rhymes so seemlessly you can't tell who wrote which stanzas - the mark of a great poetry pairing! :-) My very best wishes for 2018:-) hugs Jan xx
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Joseph May
Date: 12/31/2017 6:07:00 PM
Thank you Jan..Happy New Year!

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