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Sweet & Sour Para

It was Alvin the croc's special day,
to the lake all his friends led the way.
They said “Come, make it snappy
‘cause to make your day happy
we’ve ordered your fave take-away”

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/23/2010 1:57:00 AM

haven't been able to congratulate you on this-- yay for your win with this Sharon! hope you're having a good day :) -- nikko :)

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 7/17/2010 4:11:00 PM

I like this. line three has a laugh aloud crack to it. I like limericks myself as they seem to bring out everyone's best humor. Regards, Gerard

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/14/2010 7:46:00 PM

Oh, a birthday poem. HOw sweet, Sharon. haha. Congrats on your clever limerick. LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/14/2010 7:09:00 AM

Congrats on the 7th place win.

John Freeman

Date: 7/13/2010 9:44:00 PM

Congratulations Sharon on your num siete. Agape, Moses

James Fraser

Date: 7/13/2010 1:30:00 PM

Witty poetry Sharon, and I love the title. Many congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/13/2010 10:46:00 AM

Congratulations Sharon on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "To Die For"Limericks. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/13/2010 4:48:00 AM

Enjoyed this party on the beach. Congratulations on your win! There were many wonderfully witty entries. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/12/2010 12:36:00 PM

This was really good Sharon.. thankxxx for your comments on my Acrostic and I must tell u ..that u are the 4th person to tell me they like that love line.. hope its enough to make it a winner..with luv..thankxxx.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/12/2010 10:29:00 AM

cute and witty!!

Gert W. Knop

Date: 7/12/2010 8:48:00 AM

Hahaha, Sharon! Lovely written Limerick! I only wonder what kind of take-away it was!!! Good luck in the contest and thank you for your friendly comments...:) Gert

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/11/2010 11:10:00 PM

oh my goodness, haha poor sweet and sour take-out!! That must've been one lip-smackin' meal though, lucky Alvin the croc! Wish you the best in the contest, Sharon :) thanks so much as well, glad that my poem made you smile ^_^ --I hope your week is better!!-- nikko :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/11/2010 7:41:00 PM

A nice entry in the contest. Good luck