Michael J. Falotico Poet Tanka

Sweet

By Michael J Falotico

                                                           I hitchhiked so far.
                                                  Just me and my dreams folded.
                                                           All so nicely placed.
                                                    And now over my shoulder.
                                                    With my bag of sweet tricks.
                                                    
                                                           I fly in your dreams.
                                                  Like fruit your tasting my tongue.
                                                         Each treat is pulled out.
                                                    And deep on the bottom sits.
                                                           A warm kiss for you.
                                                   

"Bag of Tricks" contest
sponsored my Linda "The Sweetheart of P.S."
AKA "Jersey Girl"

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Kash Poet July 25, 2011 at 10:33 PM Congrats Michael on your 1st place win in the contest of Linda.Enjoyed your poem.

Carol Sunshine Brown July 25, 2011 at 10:15 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's "Bag Of Tricks" contest Michael. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels July 25, 2011 at 7:43 AM Michael congratulations on your first place win in Linda's contest :) lfde Wilma

Amanda Moore July 24, 2011 at 11:11 PM Wowie talk about romance on the steamy side Congrats on your win!

Elaine George July 24, 2011 at 3:50 PM Sensual and beautiful, Michael. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie

David Williams July 24, 2011 at 4:04 AM hey Michael, congrats on a well deserved no1. David

Jun-Jun Villanueva July 23, 2011 at 8:12 PM CONGRATULATIONS for the win. . .well-deserved victory. .no doubt. . . * smile * *-* junjun

Sara Kendrick July 23, 2011 at 3:51 PM Good one..Congrats on your win..Sara

Jack Horne July 23, 2011 at 2:19 PM I haven't been on Soup much in the last couple of days and have a ton of congrats messages to send - and not much time to send them in today! Forgive hasty message -many congrats on your wins : )

Dr.Ram Mehta July 23, 2011 at 2:00 PM My congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Linda, Michael

Andrea Dietrich July 23, 2011 at 12:00 PM YOurs was sexy, Michael! A big congrats for this unique entry.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 23, 2011 at 11:44 AM Congrats Michael on your first place win and thankxx for your constant support luv.. a new fav for the "Sweetheart"...always..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 23, 2011 at 11:43 AM Congrats Michael on your first place win and thankxx for your constant support luv.. a new fav for the "Sweetheart"...always..

Andrea Dietrich July 8, 2011 at 8:56 PM LInda is just gonna love this. And "sweet" is kind of what mine is about too. Just waiting to post it a little later! So glad to see your poem tonight. Andrea

Dinda Minardi July 8, 2011 at 6:52 AM This is witty and sweet! A very interesting dream she had! :)

Carol Sunshine Brown July 8, 2011 at 5:53 AM I have enjoyed reading your beautiful poetry this morning Michael. I hope you have a wonderful weekend filled with good health, love, laughter, and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol

Wilma Neels July 8, 2011 at 4:54 AM I reckon this one will make it to the winner's list Michael.. Good luck to you :) Love Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 7, 2011 at 1:09 PM thankxx for supporting my current contest Michael.. and good luck luv.. am sure your words will mesmerize this Jersey Girl beach lady with poochie ..first time trip for her and she luvs it.. doggie park ..she has a boyfriend already..oh... and just as bad as the "Sweetheart" ..teasing all the male doggies..haha... the beach is so great today ..102 degrees and I am in sheer heaven..luv..so happy u guys are enjoying the Summer too.. have fun .. talk soon luv..