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Sweet-Orchard Poet Trees

(an oldt 'cave wall scratches' write...re-written : ) ----------------------------------------------------------------- poet trees sweet-orchard door waking as locked in a dream of plato's cave a sentry there-in spoke an exit code and riddled questions - c - y - c - 1: see - why see? 2: why - why see why? 3: see - why see why see's? so i pondered...3 - why...see why see's? and replied why's...see why seeing why...see's why seeing why...sees why! the sentry stated - exit...and scratch your 3 = 2 + 1 outside the cave door then enter the poet tree orchard with a pebble i etched - wise sees...why why's see...wise why's stans sand

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Date: 2/15/2021 9:00:00 PM
I see why.. all the see's.. see why. I just love your creativity. This made me smile. :) Brandy
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Date: 2/16/2021 6:41:00 PM
...wowza...thanks....sometimes an itch (an idea) takes a while to etch out....scratch on paper.....it is a puzzle....stan sand
Date: 2/15/2021 3:30:00 PM
Duh I never was good at riddles but this is a very clever write. Nice job. God Bless, JB
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Date: 2/15/2021 8:21:00 PM
...thanks for the reply....the riddle is a bit mixed...up....but... the the fun was in the doing.......stan sand

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