Kim Rodrigues Poet Free verse

Sweeping Snow

angels sweeping out flakes
lackadaisically

successive shift:
fast and furious

angels on break
storehouse still
to be emptied

funniest sight?
a full-size snowman
drops from the clouds

foreman’s mad
he smiles though
at the cheeriest
curveball snow

angel’s never angry more
than a millisecond
heaven’s work a joy
yesterday, today and forever

Nov 2022

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I Am Anaya December 1, 2022 at 2:25 PM It feels structured for a free verse, Kim, such a lovely thing. I can only imagine what snow's like, (not traveling) it was 80 degrees here, on Turkey Day! Lol I Am Anaya December 1, 2022 at 7:50 PM Oh, maybe lyrics, it's like a lovely song with rhythm, Unique! Happy Holidays:) Kim Rodrigues December 1, 2022 at 3:34 PM What is it if not a free verse? Glad you enjoyed :)

Anne-Lise Andresen November 30, 2022 at 10:03 AM - Lovely written, Kim :) - Kim Rodrigues December 1, 2022 at 3:35 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Victor Buhagiar November 30, 2022 at 2:33 AM What a sight! A snowman coming down from the sky. Kim Rodrigues December 1, 2022 at 3:35 PM Wouldn’t that be cool ;)

Valsa George November 29, 2022 at 7:32 PM Snow.... snow ! So cooling and refreshing! Imagine a snow man falling from the clouds. Lovely scene, Kim. Kim Rodrigues December 1, 2022 at 3:35 PM Thank you, Valsa!

Sotto Poet November 29, 2022 at 3:21 PM Kim, you have written an excellent piece here. It was a wonderful experience for me to read it. Kim Rodrigues December 1, 2022 at 3:35 PM So glad, Lasaad! Thank you!

Eve Roper November 29, 2022 at 8:51 AM Well said, Kim. Many blessings my friend. Kim Rodrigues November 29, 2022 at 10:35 AM Thank you, sweet friend!