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Sweeping Snow

angels sweeping out flakes
lackadaisically

successive shift:
fast and furious

angels on break
storehouse still
to be emptied

funniest sight?
a full-size snowman
drops from the clouds

foreman’s mad
he smiles though
at the cheeriest
curveball snow

angel’s never angry more
than a millisecond
heaven’s work a joy
yesterday, today and forever

Nov 2022

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Date: 12/1/2022 2:25:00 PM
It feels structured for a free verse, Kim, such a lovely thing. I can only imagine what snow's like, (not traveling) it was 80 degrees here, on Turkey Day! Lol
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I Am Anaya
Date: 12/1/2022 7:50:00 PM
Oh, maybe lyrics, it's like a lovely song with rhythm, Unique! Happy Holidays:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/1/2022 3:34:00 PM
What is it if not a free verse? Glad you enjoyed :)
Date: 11/30/2022 10:03:00 AM
- Lovely written, Kim :) -
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/1/2022 3:35:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 11/30/2022 2:33:00 AM
What a sight! A snowman coming down from the sky.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/1/2022 3:35:00 PM
Wouldn’t that be cool ;)
Date: 11/29/2022 7:32:00 PM
Snow.... snow ! So cooling and refreshing! Imagine a snow man falling from the clouds. Lovely scene, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/1/2022 3:35:00 PM
Thank you, Valsa!
Date: 11/29/2022 3:21:00 PM
Kim, you have written an excellent piece here. It was a wonderful experience for me to read it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/1/2022 3:35:00 PM
So glad, Lasaad! Thank you!
Date: 11/29/2022 8:51:00 AM
Well said, Kim. Many blessings my friend.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/29/2022 10:35:00 AM
Thank you, sweet friend!

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