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Sweep Me Off My Delicate Feet

Sweep me off my delicate feet, share with me tomorrow’s sorrows- Fight for me, turn up the heat, come closer love and don’t retreat, your tenderness I shall borrow. Take me to lands so far away, so I may never wish to return- I am awaiting the lovely day our vows are spoken as the lilies sway, your gentleness I shall always yearn. I had a fever before you came near, chills ran down my spine with sweat- I finally let go of all the fear, as you wiped away one crystal tear, now your kindness I shan’t forget. Forgotten was I until you rescued me, you found me traveling in the cold- Now I am free, my blind eyes see, as we pick hearts from our loving tree, for better or worse, to have and to hold. I need not moments that allow pain, I crave hours and days that bring a hush- And in our passion, romance shall remain, on my canvas you left a yellow oil stain, caressed with grace from an artisan’s brush. October 30, 2017

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Date: 10/31/2017 2:53:00 PM
Laura, I really like this beautiful romantic poem. So full of emotion. John
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/12/2017 9:00:00 AM
thank you so much dear John :)
Date: 10/30/2017 8:01:00 AM
This is a beautifully artful write! I really enjoyed the fact that you included a painting reference at the end of your poem! That means a lot to me in my endeavors, I love oil painting but haven't done it for years...I need to go back to it so I can share my feelings through another art form other than just words, visual art can be so refreshing at times...a release! I surely loved the way you wove the rhyming within your piece, it was very nicely done! Great Work!!
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/12/2017 9:00:00 AM
thank you so much for all the kindness Russell! Be blessed :)

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