Sweet Sweat

In the heat of winter one dreary night
A storm was eager to show its might,
The temperature was frigid outside
Yet it was hot and steamy inside,
Lying languorously I saw her
on a recliner of white satin and fur,
Dressed as the day she was born,
Slick as a snake, glowing like neon
with sweat beads on her bosom and brows
I smothered her with kisses, high and low.

She tasted salty with sighs and moans
So I added some honey with my groans,
Like a landscape with peaks and valleys,
She had lava fields and hot spring galleys!

Was it a union of, ha! Sweet sudation,
Sedition in lovemaking and seduction
Or a wistfully amorous imagination?


06/15/15
Version 3 - Physical expression of love
"Sweats and Sweets" contest by Olive Eloisa Guillermo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 6/30/2015 6:12:00 PM
Abdul. Congrats on your SWEATS AND SWEETS win. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 6/29/2015 11:55:00 PM
Abdul, this is a nice sweet win *Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/28/2015 8:04:00 PM
Fantastic 'take' on the theme. Sure made me want to meet you LOL ;) Congrad's on Your Win. Light & Love
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Abdul Malik
Date: 6/28/2015 10:24:00 PM
Oh, you are so sweet, you are making me sweat!!!LOL. Appreciate your sweet comments.
Date: 6/28/2015 2:59:00 PM
Many congratulations Abdul on your placing in Olive's contest, James :) :)
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Date: 6/28/2015 1:26:00 PM
Congratulations, Abdul, on a suitably steamy write. Regards, Viv
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Date: 6/28/2015 10:27:00 PM
Thanks Viv.
Date: 6/28/2015 12:10:00 PM
Passion and seduction ably tackled and adorned in great imagery. Well done...top marks and congratulations on a deserved win. // paul
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Abdul Malik
Date: 6/28/2015 10:25:00 PM
Thanks Paul. Appreciate much.
Date: 6/28/2015 10:30:00 AM
Abdul, Steamy, hot, sultry this direct taunt on the readers imagination but so artful! The end is a twist. CONGRATULATIONS! ~Olive Eloisa
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Abdul Malik
Date: 6/28/2015 11:30:00 AM
Thanks Olive. Appreciate much.
Date: 6/15/2015 3:36:00 PM
ooh this is hot hot hot - love the imagery - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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