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Swear To You 2-24-10

dont worry, just calm me down, show me sunshine and take away this frown, dry my tears, till i can see you again, before my heart breaks, and im dead... remember always, my love is true, because forever, i swear ill love you

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Date: 3/29/2010 7:48:00 AM
You see even on a short poem you have no need for long words . This has a flow from start to end . I can read it without being stuck.
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Date: 2/26/2010 3:02:00 PM
really a great use of rhyme and just a solid write in ery sense of the word great poen keep writting
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Date: 2/25/2010 9:03:00 AM
What a wonderful way to spend this snowy day reading poetry. I am so happy that yours was amongst the ones I am reading today. Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry today Rain. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/24/2010 10:45:00 AM
so romantic
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