swaying

the right men in charge 
the right banner the right flag~
the right dead babies


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Beaufort Avatar
July 24, 2024 at 1:03 PM
Maureen, you have created a masterpiece here. I'm making it a favorite. The structure adds to the power of your message.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 8:12 AM
Thank you so much Duke. Am trying to get my noodle back into the poetics… this forced it’s way out of me, I had to stand back and let it happen ;), xomo!
Woods Avatar
July 18, 2024 at 8:01 AM
Powerful and soul searing!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 19, 2024 at 5:30 AM
Thank you Crystol! xomo
Jones Avatar
July 17, 2024 at 12:03 PM
Wow! This is hard hitting and so real so raw! Great Senryu!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 18, 2024 at 4:57 AM
Thank you Karen! I try ;), xomo
Lawless Avatar
July 17, 2024 at 7:12 AM
when the left is right all that's left is right
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 17, 2024 at 7:41 AM
Swaying to a standstill, right, um er, correct you are. ;),
Rodrigues Avatar
July 17, 2024 at 6:04 AM
Supercharged write! The drum beating with right.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 17, 2024 at 7:41 AM
Thank you Kim! xomo :),
Connelly Avatar
July 17, 2024 at 5:57 AM
Correct Maureen. Don't turn left; right? Hugs
Connelly Avatar
July 17, 2024 at 6:39 AM
so true. Id love to drive and get caught in that kind of continuum...
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 17, 2024 at 5:58 AM
We need more roundabouts. ;),
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