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swaying

the right men in charge the right banner the right flag~ the right dead babies ***

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Duke Beaufort
Date: 7/24/2024 1:03:00 PM
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Maureen, you have created a masterpiece here. I'm making it a favorite. The structure adds to the power of your message.
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/27/2024 8:12:00 AM
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Thank you so much Duke. Am trying to get my noodle back into the poetics… this forced it’s way out of me, I had to stand back and let it happen ;), xomo!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/18/2024 8:01:00 AM
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Powerful and soul searing!
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/19/2024 5:30:00 AM
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Thank you Crystol! xomo
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Karen Jones
Date: 7/17/2024 12:03:00 PM
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Wow! This is hard hitting and so real so raw! Great Senryu!
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/18/2024 4:57:00 AM
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Thank you Karen! I try ;), xomo
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John Lawless
Date: 7/17/2024 7:12:00 AM
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when the left is right all that's left is right
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/17/2024 7:41:00 AM
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Swaying to a standstill, right, um er, correct you are. ;),
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/17/2024 6:04:00 AM
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Supercharged write! The drum beating with right.
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/17/2024 7:41:00 AM
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Thank you Kim! xomo :),
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 7/17/2024 5:57:00 AM
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Correct Maureen. Don't turn left; right? Hugs
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 7/17/2024 6:39:00 AM
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so true. Id love to drive and get caught in that kind of continuum...
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/17/2024 5:58:00 AM
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We need more roundabouts. ;),
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/17/2024 5:42:00 AM
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Oof! You didn't pull any punches here. There's no such thing as the "right leader". They're all bloodguilty in one way or another. Ditto the clergy
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 7/17/2024 5:51:00 AM
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I do my best in seventeen or less. I agree with you x2.

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