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Swat

A fly flies in; You want him out. That's what a swatter's All about. You hope he lands Where you can reach. (Some spots have rules You should not breach.) Like on a vase Or someone's head. You need a wall Or door instead. And then you aim With what you've got. If luck is yours, You've made the shot. The fly falls down Upon the floor And then your swatter Waits for more.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/18/2017 10:36:00 AM
When you gotta swat, you gotta swat. But I like it when they're on the screen door and you just open the door and shoo fly shoo. :) btw, I it's always such a pleasure to read your talent for phrasing rhymes.
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Date: 8/16/2017 3:29:00 PM
good one, Ilene. Here is a little trick I read. The fly always goes backwards when he takes off. So you aim the swatter at the back of him and for sure, he will be SQUASHED!
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Date: 8/16/2017 1:03:00 PM
Ha ha die fly die great humour Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/16/2017 12:46:00 PM
Awesome :)
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Date: 8/16/2017 12:43:00 PM
You're a mighty huntress on the prowl, Ilene! They seem to land on everything, mostly when you've put down the swatter. Love your humor.
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Date: 8/16/2017 12:28:00 PM
OMG...I've been infiltrated lately...tried all the tricks but still swatting...great poem ilene
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