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Human-Written

Written, October 18, 2024
Written for the International Contest, October Symbols - Pleiades Style
Sponsor, Andrea Dietrich, Judged 11/02/2024

FIRST PLACE

Swans on a lake with autumn leaves in the background | Premium AI-generated image

Swans

 

Swans float on the park pond,
serene, quiet, graceful,
sipping the clear water.
Sun glistens on trees as
scents of autumn drift with
scenes of swans to view; oh 
sweet blessed October day !

octoberpleiades

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Sara Kendrick

November 9, 2024 at 4:45 AM

Congrats on your winner. Sara K

Constance La France

November 9, 2024 at 9:09 AM

Sara, thank you for the congrats, Constance

Sam Kauffman

November 4, 2024 at 10:35 AM

Constance, congratulations on your win with this enchanting scene of serenity that you have so beautifully described. It is mesmerizing. Hope you are doing well. Harvest blessings to you and hugs!

Constance La France

November 4, 2024 at 4:04 PM

Sam, thanks for the congratultions, comment and compliment, Constance

Paula Goldsmith

November 3, 2024 at 10:17 AM

Congratulations on your win. I loved reading your lovely "Swan" write. I love your pretty picture. Have a blessed day writing away.............

Constance La France

November 3, 2024 at 10:53 PM

Paula, thank you for the congratulations and compliment, love Constance

Kim Rodrigues

November 2, 2024 at 8:05 PM

Congrats, Constance! Love your peaceful pleiades!

Constance La France

November 3, 2024 at 10:53 PM

Kim, thanks for the congrats and compliment, love Constance

Andrea Dietrich

November 2, 2024 at 4:41 PM

Pretty picture now that I am seeing it too!

Constance La France

November 2, 2024 at 5:47 PM

Thank you, I love that picture too, love Constance

Andrea Dietrich

November 2, 2024 at 4:39 PM

A very beautiful scene. I like how you have them sipping clear water and how you added in autumn scents as well. Congrats, Constance.

Constance La France

November 2, 2024 at 5:47 PM

Andrea, thank you for the contest and my wonderful placement, and for the comment, compliment and congrats, love Constance

Valsa George

October 21, 2024 at 2:56 AM

Such a beautiful scene. In our recent trip to Europe, l could see so many swans swimming in one of the lakes.... forgot it's name...I think lake Lucerne in Switzerland. It was an engrossing scene. When l read this beautiful pleiades and saw this image, l just thought about my experience. All the best dear Constance!

Constance La France

October 21, 2024 at 7:29 AM

Valsa, thank you so much for the compliment, we have a lot in Ontario, Canada on the ponds, and streams in the summer months. I have always loved watching them glide along, sometimes with their babies tucked under their wings, such peace, love Constance

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