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swans

 

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Swans

Swans steam across the lake.
Streaming in, heads held high.
Strung out in single file.
Stippling surface with wakes.
Signaling flock to join.
Sensing storm clouds brewing,
Shuddering storm ahead.
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Dietrich Avatar
November 2, 2024 at 5:37 PM
I really loved the three middle lines and how well I see those lines go with your picture . Congrats for your win
Rodgers Avatar
October 15, 2024 at 7:06 AM
Hello John, What a great alliterative poem about swans. Autumn Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
Anderson Avatar
October 15, 2024 at 8:05 AM
Thanks very much. Cheers and Best Wishes
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