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swans

 

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Swans steam across the lake. Streaming in, heads held high. Strung out in single file. Stippling surface with wakes. Signaling flock to join. Sensing storm clouds brewing, Shuddering storm ahead.

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Date: 11/2/2024 5:37:00 PM
I really loved the three middle lines and how well I see those lines go with your picture . Congrats for your win
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Date: 10/15/2024 7:06:00 AM
Hello John, What a great alliterative poem about swans. Autumn Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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John Anderson
Date: 10/15/2024 8:05:00 AM
Thanks very much. Cheers and Best Wishes

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