Swans


Swimming across the lake, 
svelte swans, they're gliding by, 
S-shaped necks meet and greet, 
Sweet romancing duo's
slender necks form cute heart. 
Stay forever lifemates ~
Symbol of loyal love. 


Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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George Avatar
November 3, 2024 at 8:56 PM
This is quite sweet. Swans are the most regal looking birds. It is so arresting to watch them gliding smoothly along water. To see their romance is even more alluring. Congratulations Joanna on your great win.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 3, 2024 at 10:45 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful/romantic "Swans" write. Have a blessed day writing away.............
Dietrich Avatar
November 2, 2024 at 5:12 PM
I enjoyed your romantic description of swans. Congrats in my contest, Joanna.
Buhagiar Avatar
October 19, 2024 at 1:57 AM
Perfect Pleiades using the letter S. Best for a win.
One Avatar
October 14, 2024 at 12:43 PM
Great use of the letter S and wonderful imagery..
Rodgers Avatar
October 14, 2024 at 11:43 AM
Dear Joanna, I love the alliteration and the swans' romance. I very much enjoyed reading! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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