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Swans

Swimming across the lake, svelte swans, they're gliding by, S-shaped necks meet and greet, Sweet romancing duo's slender necks form cute heart. Stay forever lifemates ~ Symbol of loyal love.

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Date: 11/3/2024 8:56:00 PM
This is quite sweet. Swans are the most regal looking birds. It is so arresting to watch them gliding smoothly along water. To see their romance is even more alluring. Congratulations Joanna on your great win.
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Date: 11/3/2024 10:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful/romantic "Swans" write. Have a blessed day writing away.............
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Date: 11/2/2024 5:12:00 PM
I enjoyed your romantic description of swans. Congrats in my contest, Joanna.
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Date: 10/19/2024 1:57:00 AM
Perfect Pleiades using the letter S. Best for a win.
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Date: 10/14/2024 12:43:00 PM
Great use of the letter S and wonderful imagery..
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Date: 10/14/2024 11:43:00 AM
Dear Joanna, I love the alliteration and the swans' romance. I very much enjoyed reading! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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