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Swans - For One Liners Two Contest

SWANS THE THRUMMING OF THEIR WINGS DREAMS DISTANT THINGS 12/5/2015 Submitted to One liners two – Poetry contest sponsor – Silent One

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Tammy Reams

Date: 12/9/2015 6:11:00 PM

Congrats on your win John! Sorry this is late.

Kim Merryman

Date: 12/8/2015 9:39:00 PM

This is really good, John! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 12/7/2015 6:49:00 AM

Congratulations John.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/7/2015 12:56:00 AM

Congrats on great win with this amazingly beautiful write John!

Len Gasun

Date: 12/6/2015 10:10:00 PM

This is so great! I love it! Warm congrats on your win my dear friend! Hugs and cheers! <3Leonora

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/6/2015 6:59:00 PM

this was REALLY a good one! Congrats on the winners' list.

John Lawless
Date: 12/6/2015 8:17:00 PM

Thanks Andrea.

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/6/2015 5:41:00 PM

John, Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis

John Lawless
Date: 12/6/2015 8:16:00 PM

thanks Alexis

Lin Lane

Date: 12/6/2015 3:27:00 PM

well done, John...congratulations.

John Lawless
Date: 12/6/2015 8:16:00 PM

thanks Lin

Jan Allison

Date: 12/6/2015 2:36:00 PM

Dropping back with my congratsJohn:-) hugs Jan xx

John Lawless
Date: 12/6/2015 8:16:00 PM

thanks Jan

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/6/2015 2:32:00 PM

- Congrats on your great "One Liners Two" image, John !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Lawless
Date: 12/6/2015 8:15:00 PM

thank you Anne Lise

Skat A

Date: 12/6/2015 2:26:00 PM

John, Congrats on your one liner TWO win. SKAT

John Lawless
Date: 12/6/2015 8:15:00 PM

thanks SKAT

John Lawless

Date: 12/5/2015 10:25:00 AM

Thanks Jan, I have had as many as six swans fly low over my head while fishing. It is an impressive "thrumming" sound full of power and purpose.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/5/2015 9:36:00 AM

lovely alliteration John good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

John Lawless
Date: 12/5/2015 10:31:00 AM

Jan, I posted my reply in the comment box...more coffee please...