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swallowed by the night -

the heavens yawn a sea of suns above me
          each shining gem to countlessly attest
               to how I conned her barren heart to love me
     by pining for the passions she possessed

the saga of our love has found its closure
          while I, with bold temerity, did ask
               if she might give, thereof, honest disclosure
     instead of serving, cold, the bloody task

why can't the midnight skies embrace my being
          and turn me to the dust from whence I came?
               the use has left my eyes, for tears or seeing
     her proclivity for just assigning blame

you see, she found her way into my marrow
          each nuance of her face now haunts by soul
               life's aperture, today, is oh, so narrow
     despair as deep as space, and black as coal

so please, dear firmament, consume my spirit
          devour me with the flame of earthly death
               though she has no intent to ever hear it
     please make her tender name ...

my final breath.






~ 1st Place ~  in the "Eight Word Challenge - 9" Poetry Contest, John Hamilton, Judge & Sponsor.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 12/2/2018 9:32:00 AM
Like always , Greg, I enjoyed reading. Great way of the use of the 8 words .. Congratulations on your 1st place win.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/22/2018 7:09:00 PM
That's very sweet, Eve, thank you very much, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 11/30/2018 8:24:00 PM
Another incredibly, beautiful write, Greg. You made such excellent use of the required words as only you can do. Congratulations on your First Place win. Sandra <3
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/22/2018 7:08:00 PM
Oh, you are too kind as usual, Sandra, but I so appreciate it, and I'm very thankful that you enjoyed my poem! Blessings, Dear Poet! :-) <3
Date: 11/30/2018 12:46:00 PM
Such a darkly moving tribute to the pain of unrequited longing, congratulations on a well-earned win!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/22/2018 7:07:00 PM
Many thanks to you, Michelle, I'm pleased you enjoyed my poem! :-) <3
Date: 11/28/2018 2:29:00 PM
A daring ending to this downward spiral of a revelatory darkling write, my friend. Congratulations are in order for such outstanding poesy. Season's Best, Gershon
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/29/2018 11:56:00 PM
The same to you, my friend, and thank you very much for your kind and heartfelt comments. Blessings! :-)
Date: 11/28/2018 8:54:00 AM
Fading passions consume the soul..Congrats on your win Greg..Blessings to you and yours this holiday season..
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/29/2018 11:55:00 PM
Well-said, my Poet Brother ... and thank you so kindly! Blessings! :-)
Date: 11/28/2018 8:50:00 AM
Oh. This is so beautifully written. Your use of rhyme so pleasing to read. I greatly admire how you used unusual words to form the rhyming pattern. I know that can be daunting. You, however, have made it flow effortlessly. The tender emotions shine through. A great write. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. All my best. Deb
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/29/2018 11:54:00 PM
This is such a wonderful comment - poetry in itself - and it made me smile warmly - thank you so very much, Deb, I so greatly appreciate you taking the time. Blessings, my friend! :-) <3
Date: 11/28/2018 7:16:00 AM
Back with congrats dear friend <3 xomo
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/29/2018 11:53:00 PM
Thanks so much, Dearest Mo! <3
Date: 11/28/2018 1:13:00 AM
Sending you so many congrats Gregory on your top placing. I loved your poem, so poignant and poetic, thank you! Kindest thoughts Ann x
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/29/2018 11:53:00 PM
That's very kind of you to say, Ann - thank you very much, my friend! Blessings! :-) <3
Date: 11/27/2018 5:29:00 PM
Congrats my poetic brother...on this awesome entry, Gregory...love & light...^WW^
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/29/2018 11:52:00 PM
Thank you so very kindly, ^WW^ - I greatly appreciate it, my friend! :-)
Date: 11/27/2018 4:25:00 PM
Loved it, no surprise to see you at the top again Greg, congrats on a fine shared first place win!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/29/2018 11:49:00 PM
That's very kind of you, John, and I am very thankful for my wonderful placement! Blessings and thanks! :-)
Date: 11/25/2018 8:31:00 AM
Epic love <3 fantastic write dear poet, my best to you in the contest! mo hugs
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/29/2018 11:48:00 PM
Thank you so much, Dear Mo! :-) <3
Date: 11/25/2018 6:09:00 AM
Great words.. Very poetic... Great use of the 8 words..
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/29/2018 11:48:00 PM
Thank you very much, Silent One, much appreciated!
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