Swallow

We've had our little clash of wills.
Your determination won the day.
You'll build your nest above my door,
My guests may enter another way.
You do not scold like other birds,
You just come back again and again.
I have not the heart to tear it down.
Your home will stay.  You win. You win.

With admiration I am glad
You chose to build your nest so near.
I'll watch your little family grow,
Remembering children I held dear.
Swiftly back and forth with food,
So diligently, you and your mate.
You lovingly provide their needs
Yet to try their wings they cannot wait.

I remember well the pride and pain,
Knowing each step my children took
Would bring me closer to the day
I'd  be alone in my little nook.
So tend them now and love them well
The day will come as you well know
They will try their wings and find them strong.
Without thought of your loss will fly and go.



Won first place in constance's bird contest
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La France Avatar
July 4, 2010 at 5:35 AM
Hello Joyce, still a beautiful poem, and just to let you know, I am mailing your Certificate of Achievement today, sorry for the delay, work, work, work .... Love Constance
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June 28, 2010 at 9:46 AM
Congratulations Joyce on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Bird's". Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
June 27, 2010 at 5:07 PM
aww so precious! great win! Light & Love
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June 26, 2010 at 11:04 PM
WAy to go, JOyce. I always wondered if this was the kind of bird that took roost above our house one year. I looked in so many books and could not figure out what it was but I remember swallow was one of the birds I considered it might be. LUv,Andrea
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June 26, 2010 at 11:46 AM
Congrat's on your win Joyce, wonderful poem!~Tirzah~
K. Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 8:47 AM
Hi Joyce :) --enjoyed your poem about these swallows :) --Congrats on your 1st place win! -nikko :)
Richards Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 7:01 AM
Congratulations on this delightful poem, Joyce!! You have a wealth of winning and wonderful poetry! This was a gem indeed! Love, Carrie
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June 26, 2010 at 1:18 AM
Congratulations on your first place win Joyce. Your poem is lovely ~ Sharon :)
La France Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 10:32 PM
Congratulations, Joyce, on first place in my Bird Contest, with this lovely poem of a Swallow, please send me your address by soupmail so I can send your Certificate of Achievement. Love Constance
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June 25, 2010 at 9:12 AM
How beautifully you compare the importance of the nurturing process in both animals and nature, Joyce. This poem is genuinely touching. Birds once built a nest in a hanging basket of impatiens. Unfortunately, my cats disturbed the nest. I hope the nest above your door remains protected and these birds live to thrive. Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 6:16 AM
Nice and soft thoughts well penned.
Nutter Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 6:04 PM
Excellent piece, had a Robin build a nest directly on top of my ceiling fan on my patio. After all had departed I had to replace the fan due to all of the debre in the motor. Nice piece.
Gorelick Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 5:54 PM
Beautiful piece..I like the comparrisons you made with your family..a little typo second to the last line. BG
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