Swagman

The flies like molasses clinging firmly to his back,
as aimlessly he ambled along the dry dusty track.
Like a wave of the ocean the flies would swarm to his face,
but were expertly dispatched with his gum branch mace.

A battered farm ute lurches forward to a stop,
"Give ya lift inta town mate, in the back ya can hop".
"Na me legs are work'n fine, they're not painted on
With a shake of the head, put in gear and the ute was gone.

Go into town? he thinks to himself,
don't need a fancy shop, picking food from the shelf.
Felt the grub in his pocket, some heavy salted liver,
maybe catch a fish or two from the Murrumbidgee river.

Below a sun bleached hat hangs a face lined and weathered.
A broad happy smile with teeth barely tethered.
Does anyone know him, does he even have a name?
Where is he from, has he a family to lay claim?

When he beds for the night and sets up his camp,
unrolls his swag using the fire for his lamp.
What thoughts surround him, what goes on in his head?
Will anyone care when life ebbs and he's dead?

The life of a swagman is elusive to most,
He's just a brush stroke on the landscape appearing like a ghost.
A happy go lucky, vagabond, traveling pilgrim.
But just like us one of Gods precious children.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Cresswell Avatar
October 6, 2017 at 7:26 AM
I am heart struck by his piece. You have introduced me to a character who would not thank me for my soppy feelings about his life. I would like to know more. enjoyed your poem immensely.
Emu Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 4:47 PM
Thanks Patricia, they are eclectic non conforming travelers. What you would probably term vagabonds.
Bickerstaffe Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 5:45 PM
This is my second time to praise this piece... it really is exceptional and thus deserves another round of KUDOS, my friend! Best wishes, Keith
Emu Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 12:19 AM
Well thanks so much keith appreciate your thoughts. Cheers, Craig
Delaney Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 11:41 AM
Where have they gone? The ones' with time to tell a yarn. Who could name any bird, or insect or tree. Those were the days of bush wisdom and laconic humour. We miss them. SuZ
Emu Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 5:02 PM
sadly I think they are a dying breed. Some people put them in the class of homeless with mental illness. Eclectic yes, mentally ill No. We knew 2 swaggies as kids who used to come by our property in Western Victoria did some work for some nourishment. Never accepted money
Bettridge Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 9:05 PM
Your Poem painted a picture of a Swagman vividly and (Imo) would sit well in the company of those written by Henry Lawson and A.B. (Banjo) Patterson.
Emu Avatar
December 25, 2015 at 10:33 AM
Thank you Rob for you kind words. I think I have a long way to go. Lawson is one of my favorite poets.
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 4:41 AM
Skillfully crafted and rendered. You have a formidable vocabulary... along with some sumptuous imagery and expert couplet rhyming I would assess this as a masterpiece my friend. BRAVO! Best wishes, Keith
Emu Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 11:23 PM
I plan to check out some of your work when I get the opportunity Keith, hopefully I can take some lessons from you. Regards, Craig
Emu Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 11:20 PM
Hi Keith, thank you for your kind review. I consider myself a novice and compared to others I have read I feel a bit intimidated. I tell people that I don't write my eyes do it for me
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