Suzy and June

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For Eve Roper's Nursery Rhymes Poetry Contest

I sure hope this image does not make it difficult to comment like what happend in the last nursery rhyme contest. 

Suzy with her cute black curls
and red rose in her hair
plays with June. These rose-cheeked girls
have lots of love to share.

Tea parties make both girls grin.
Some sweet tea they have made.
Blue/pink cups their tea is in.
A matching cloth is laid.

The girls sure love things blue and pink;
June wears a pink rose too.
The tea they now prepare to drink.
A nice chat will ensure.

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Date: 9/5/2024 11:09:00 PM
Congrats and wow lots of views!
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Date: 9/4/2024 12:30:00 PM
How the heck does this have 4475 views on it??
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Date: 9/4/2024 3:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Very stunning photo. Sara K
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Date: 9/1/2024 11:57:00 AM
Sweet, fun and nursery-rhymey.
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Date: 8/27/2024 1:03:00 PM
Cute! :) I loved your image, too, personally - <3
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Date: 8/26/2024 9:38:00 PM
VERY GOOD. Enjoyed in full. Congrats.
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Date: 8/26/2024 8:00:00 AM
Dear Andrea, your lovely nursery rhyme brought a feeling of comfort and nostalgia. I was charmed by the portrayal of Suzy and June. A wonderful tea party! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/25/2024 11:55:00 PM
Beautiful Andrea. Very picturesque and matching soo well with the details of the image. Love your pink cheeked little girls... Suzy and June
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Date: 8/25/2024 5:30:00 PM
Joy and sweetness all the way through!
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Date: 8/23/2024 12:27:00 AM
This is so cute sweet andrea! And how do you come up with such names, suzy and june! Goes so well together and is so beautiful! I am thinking of writing for this contest too! I know you will do well! Why wouldn you! You are a natural! Best wishes! Sending you light! Hope fam trip is going well
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Date: 8/22/2024 11:27:00 PM
You write these so well Andrea best wishes for the contest. Tom
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Date: 8/22/2024 6:55:00 PM
A little too adorable for an old grouch like me. 'C'mon Gershon!' (I remonstrated, talking to myself). Sooooooo cute, Andrea! Huzzah, Gershon
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Date: 8/22/2024 5:31:00 PM
so delicious poem,dear Andrea, little girls are so cute, they pretty much understand the world , i guess, have a beautiful week end
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Date: 8/22/2024 4:11:00 PM
Very darling! A cheerful slice of life. We need more.
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Date: 8/22/2024 1:58:00 PM
what a sweet interpretation of the image Andrea, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/22/2024 1:22:00 PM
Sweet and cute. Immediately the song Ebony and Ivory came to mind
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Date: 8/22/2024 1:06:00 PM
Just coming here to test out whether comments can be made with the picture being included
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/22/2024 2:00:00 PM
working well Andrea, i know others have had issues too xx
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