Andrea Dietrich Poet Rhyme

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For Eve Roper's Nursery Rhymes Poetry Contest

I sure hope this image does not make it difficult to comment like what happend in the last nursery rhyme contest. 

Suzy and June

Suzy with her cute black curls
and red rose in her hair
plays with June. These rose-cheeked girls
have lots of love to share.

Tea parties make both girls grin.
Some sweet tea they have made.
Blue/pink cups their tea is in.
A matching cloth is laid.

The girls sure love things blue and pink;
June wears a pink rose too.
The tea they now prepare to drink.
A nice chat will ensure.

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Karen Jones September 5, 2024 at 11:09 PM Congrats and wow lots of views!

Andrea Dietrich September 4, 2024 at 12:30 PM How the heck does this have 4475 views on it??

Sara Kendrick September 4, 2024 at 3:44 AM Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Very stunning photo. Sara K

David Crandall September 1, 2024 at 11:57 AM Sweet, fun and nursery-rhymey.

Paige Hind August 27, 2024 at 1:03 PM Cute! :) I loved your image, too, personally - <3

Anisha Dutta August 26, 2024 at 9:38 PM VERY GOOD. Enjoyed in full. Congrats.

Susan Ashley August 26, 2024 at 8:00 AM Dear Andrea, your lovely nursery rhyme brought a feeling of comfort and nostalgia. I was charmed by the portrayal of Suzy and June. A wonderful tea party! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Valsa George August 25, 2024 at 11:55 PM Beautiful Andrea. Very picturesque and matching soo well with the details of the image. Love your pink cheeked little girls... Suzy and June

Kim Rodrigues August 25, 2024 at 5:30 PM Joy and sweetness all the way through!

Ink Empress August 23, 2024 at 12:27 AM This is so cute sweet andrea! And how do you come up with such names, suzy and june! Goes so well together and is so beautiful! I am thinking of writing for this contest too! I know you will do well! Why wouldn you! You are a natural! Best wishes! Sending you light! Hope fam trip is going well

Tom Cunningham August 22, 2024 at 11:27 PM You write these so well Andrea best wishes for the contest. Tom

Gershon Wolf August 22, 2024 at 6:55 PM A little too adorable for an old grouch like me. 'C'mon Gershon!' (I remonstrated, talking to myself). Sooooooo cute, Andrea! Huzzah, Gershon

Yann Rolland August 22, 2024 at 5:31 PM so delicious poem,dear Andrea, little girls are so cute, they pretty much understand the world , i guess, have a beautiful week end

Joseph P. DiMino August 22, 2024 at 4:11 PM Very darling! A cheerful slice of life. We need more.

Jan Allison August 22, 2024 at 1:58 PM what a sweet interpretation of the image Andrea, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich August 22, 2024 at 1:06 PM Just coming here to test out whether comments can be made with the picture being included Jan Allison August 22, 2024 at 2:00 PM working well Andrea, i know others have had issues too xx