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Poetry/Rhyme/Suzanne, My Doll
Copyright Protected, ID 06-1556-677-20
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written, June 20, 2023
For the International Contest, Lost Doll
sponsor, Charlie Messina, Judged 07/20/2023

Second Place

Perfect In Pink Annika Lifelike Poseable Baby Doll

 
When I was a little girl I loved all my dolls, but, there was one that was very special to me; some sat on my bed, some upon shelves on the walls, one day we took a trip to places filigree ! My best doll was called Suzanne after my sister, she was an angel in heaven in God's strong arms; I slept with Suzanne and at night often kissed her, we came home to red flames and fire truck alarms ! I ran towards the house screaming for my Suzanne, mom held me in her arms as I wept- dead again; our house was gone and we went to stay with gran, for days I cried and could not even speak my pain ! Mom bought me a new Suzanne but I called her Anne, she came everywhere with me even to my school; I kept her safe with me- oh, yes that was my plan, at our church on Sunday she learnt the golden rule ! In truth, I never forgot my very best doll, she was gone forever and forever was lost; sometimes, when it is quiet I can hear her call, though Anne, I so love- and she will never get tossed !

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