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This poem is for Broken Wings, to bring her a smile from above!

Suzanne in the Clouds I am here, way up here At peace and flying free Dancing with angels Singing with the accompaniment of violins and harps Choirs here abound, such a wondrous sound We have swings, numerous playgrounds of fun Here all we little ones, smile and eat sugar plums We see the heavens, we have become the universe So yes I miss you, but smile it’s not the end Look up in those dark gray skies It’s me your flesh and blood that does cry Not for the days of long ago It’s me who weeps and sheds tears for you so sad So I send you hugs and kisses I send you heavens wishes Live for me, and live for you You have too, you see, live for two! There will be a day we are children together It will not matter the time or the weather So I beg of you way down there Live this life as if I were there I am just a little one With the gift of the after I am no wiser just filled with joyous laughter Knowing one day We will all be family once again Kisses from heaven

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/15/2016 12:11:00 PM
Know Constance or Broken Wings will love this one about her sister.
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arthur vaso
Date: 2/17/2016 7:04:00 PM
Thank you so much Thomas, it heartens me when I see the kindness and goodwill towards others, much appreciated!
Date: 2/14/2016 10:23:00 PM
Sad to hear about her loss. But as I'm reading the comments below it looks as though she appreciates what you did. It's sad (but only for us) for those that pass soon, it's a shorter trip to paradise.
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Date: 2/17/2016 7:03:00 PM
Thanks Timothy, I am just glad she treasured this.
Date: 2/14/2016 10:08:00 PM
Such a joyous demeanor in this poem. "Live for me, and live for you You have to, you see, live for two" .... Did Dr. Seuss co-write this poem with you up in the clouds?? LOL. Seriously though ... good poem. It's not often we read about the deceased from the opposite perspective.
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Date: 2/14/2016 10:16:00 PM
Thanks Tim, I wrote this for Broken Wings, Suzanne was her sister, taken from earth way to young. It always breaks my heart when people suffer such tragic losses!
Date: 2/14/2016 5:10:00 PM
Hello Arthur ... the line between heaven and earth never breaks - Lindsay
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arthur vaso
Date: 2/14/2016 6:32:00 PM
So true, thank you!
Date: 2/14/2016 4:25:00 PM
That is how I picture heaven..How fun it must be..Love the vision you've created..Can nearly hear little angels playing hopscotch..while lookin at us from above and whisperin..'Everything is gonna be ok '. Awesome !!!
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arthur vaso
Date: 2/14/2016 6:31:00 PM
Thank you Charmaine, I loved your comment! Hugs
Date: 2/14/2016 7:15:00 AM
Arthur, I know you wrote this poem for me and my sister Suzanne up above, it is so beautiful (weeping) I am going to treasure this whenever I am missing her I will read it, it is as though she is talking to me saying everything is going to be okay, of course I must fav, this, thank you with all my heart, love Constance ~
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arthur vaso
Date: 2/14/2016 6:28:00 PM
I am glad I could bring a small piece of joy to you. Hugs
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 2/14/2016 5:06:00 PM
When I read this poem I thought of you and your sister - now I see that Arthur wrote it for you is so so touching:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 2/14/2016 6:48:00 AM
Your poem brought tears to my eyes Arthur - I really am lost for words ... I am sure one day they will be reunited :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/14/2016 6:27:00 PM
Thank you so much Jan, I was kinda that why myself while writing this!