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Susurrus

Heart yearns for a remedy to help it unwind, as thoughts drift to forgotten forests of the mind. Distant visions with hues of a sepia tone, soul senses tranquil nourishment of being home. Sweet serene scents feel like a delicate dream, as light cascades through a canopy of green. Silence is stolen by nature's wisp like whispers, like an orchestra of creaking, crawling murmurs. Pines and acorns adorn trails of leaves lost from trees, soft susurrus of sighs echo from birds and bees. Wildflowers garnish along stream rocks moist with moss, a fusion of colours adding a touch of gloss. Bohemian spirit delights in harmony, rejoicing within an enchanted symphony.
Silent One 2 June 2019
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Marcum Wong Avatar
July 10, 2019 at 7:04 AM
This is so lovely and serene Silent...now I can go to sleep! Thank you my friend. : ) xxoo
Chircop Avatar
July 6, 2019 at 5:09 PM
Awesomeness..It feels so good to be back reading such beautiful poetry.
Roper Avatar
July 1, 2019 at 4:53 PM
Nice if we could just close our eyes and whoosh! be in the middle of a serene place to take our minds of burdens. love the beautiful imagery and verse. hugs dear friend
Sergi Avatar
June 30, 2019 at 10:23 AM
Hi Silent One: Reads like a vintage prose. my compliments!
Ball Avatar
June 18, 2019 at 5:22 AM
Ooooo! The place my spirit often visits to replenish itself. Great job here. God Bless, JB
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 5:08 PM
What is better than Nature to fill the soul with bliss.. heal the wounds.. clear the mind and colour the heart.. Your silence melts away as the humming spirit of Nature takes over.. an exquisite and an enrapturing imagery of a natural flair deserving the recognition and the honour of your fellow poets and friends.. Congratulations on your POTD, Silent One. I fave your gem.. Always an immense pleasure to read your amazing poetry. My deepest regards. God bless you.
Duet Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 1:13 PM
P.S. And, congratulations on getting POTD. :D
Duet Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 1:03 PM
So artful with a real sense of nostalgia made me think of "home" too. Lovely....
Messina Avatar
June 10, 2019 at 8:54 AM
Another gem from your golden pen, SO. Belated congrats on having this awarded POTD. ~Charlie
Callus Avatar
June 9, 2019 at 4:35 AM
Superb imagery! Nature's whispers are indeed a balm to any heart, S-1. Congrats on p.o.t.d. Regards // paul
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 8, 2019 at 6:23 PM
Belated Congratulations on this gorgeous poem receiving POTD honors Silent! : )
Robinson Jr. Avatar
June 6, 2019 at 4:11 AM
Simply beautiful, SO! Kudos on POTD. Your pastoral phrasing is pen divine. Pure poetry! Love and more love always
Rodrigues Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 10:56 PM
Congratulations on POTD!!
Sands Avatar
June 4, 2019 at 4:28 PM
Congratulations for POTD ! :)
Wolf Avatar
June 4, 2019 at 1:32 PM
Congratulations to you, Silent, on your wonderful poem of the day with this 'heart-healthy,' poignantly penned sonnet. Best wishes, Gershon
Andresen Avatar
June 4, 2019 at 12:28 PM
- Sounds like a familiar and dearly enchanted symphony, S.O. :) - A wonderful poem, congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Nicole Avatar
June 4, 2019 at 11:03 AM
Congratulations Silent One, on Poem of the Day. Your thoughts touch the wind. :) Brandy
Proxenos Avatar
June 4, 2019 at 10:22 AM
Calling back with congratulations on your great write being chosen as POTD - an honor and a privilege. Hugs, Jennifer.
Wanter Avatar
June 4, 2019 at 9:36 AM
Back to say Congratulations!
Warrior Avatar
June 4, 2019 at 9:27 AM
Congrats!!! on POTD!! dear friend...this is definitely an SOS...'Silent One Sonnet'...superbly done...^WW^
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 4, 2019 at 9:24 AM
Gorgeous, my friend, Congratulations for POTD! xomo
Lindley Avatar
June 4, 2019 at 9:01 AM
Congratulations on this superbly composed sonnet being awarded POTD honors my friend. Definitely a fav for me!
Michael Avatar
June 4, 2019 at 8:37 AM
"Bohemian spirit delights in harmony" you can bet on it....Congratulations SO....
Williams Avatar
June 4, 2019 at 8:14 AM
Love the verses it could be made into a song. Congrats on your POTW.
May Avatar
June 4, 2019 at 8:12 AM
Great imagery with this beautiful write Silent One, Congrats on POTD..
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