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Heart yearns for a remedy to help it unwind, as thoughts drift to forgotten forests of the mind. Distant visions with hues of a sepia tone, soul senses tranquil nourishment of being home. Sweet serene scents feel like a delicate dream, as light cascades through a canopy of green. Silence is stolen by nature's wisp like whispers, like an orchestra of creaking, crawling murmurs. Pines and acorns adorn trails of leaves lost from trees, soft susurrus of sighs echo from birds and bees. Wildflowers garnish along stream rocks moist with moss, a fusion of colours adding a touch of gloss. Bohemian spirit delights in harmony, rejoicing within an enchanted symphony.
Silent One 2 June 2019

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Date: 7/10/2019 7:04:00 AM
This is so lovely and serene Silent...now I can go to sleep! Thank you my friend. : ) xxoo
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Date: 7/6/2019 5:09:00 PM
Awesomeness..It feels so good to be back reading such beautiful poetry.
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Date: 7/1/2019 4:53:00 PM
Nice if we could just close our eyes and whoosh! be in the middle of a serene place to take our minds of burdens. love the beautiful imagery and verse. hugs dear friend
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Date: 6/30/2019 10:23:00 AM
Hi Silent One: Reads like a vintage prose. my compliments!
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Date: 6/18/2019 5:22:00 AM
Ooooo! The place my spirit often visits to replenish itself. Great job here. God Bless, JB
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Date: 6/12/2019 5:08:00 PM
What is better than Nature to fill the soul with bliss.. heal the wounds.. clear the mind and colour the heart.. Your silence melts away as the humming spirit of Nature takes over.. an exquisite and an enrapturing imagery of a natural flair deserving the recognition and the honour of your fellow poets and friends.. Congratulations on your POTD, Silent One. I fave your gem.. Always an immense pleasure to read your amazing poetry. My deepest regards. God bless you.
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Date: 6/12/2019 1:13:00 PM
P.S. And, congratulations on getting POTD. :D
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Date: 6/12/2019 1:03:00 PM
So artful with a real sense of nostalgia made me think of "home" too. Lovely....
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Date: 6/10/2019 8:54:00 AM
Another gem from your golden pen, SO. Belated congrats on having this awarded POTD. ~Charlie
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Date: 6/9/2019 4:35:00 AM
Superb imagery! Nature's whispers are indeed a balm to any heart, S-1. Congrats on p.o.t.d. Regards // paul
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Date: 6/8/2019 6:23:00 PM
Belated Congratulations on this gorgeous poem receiving POTD honors Silent! : )
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Date: 6/6/2019 4:11:00 AM
Simply beautiful, SO! Kudos on POTD. Your pastoral phrasing is pen divine. Pure poetry! Love and more love always
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Date: 6/5/2019 10:56:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD!!
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Date: 6/4/2019 4:28:00 PM
Congratulations for POTD ! :)
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Date: 6/4/2019 1:32:00 PM
Congratulations to you, Silent, on your wonderful poem of the day with this 'heart-healthy,' poignantly penned sonnet. Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 6/4/2019 12:28:00 PM
- Sounds like a familiar and dearly enchanted symphony, S.O. :) - A wonderful poem, congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/4/2019 11:03:00 AM
Congratulations Silent One, on Poem of the Day. Your thoughts touch the wind. :) Brandy
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Date: 6/4/2019 10:22:00 AM
Calling back with congratulations on your great write being chosen as POTD - an honor and a privilege. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 6/4/2019 9:36:00 AM
Back to say Congratulations!
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Date: 6/4/2019 9:27:00 AM
Congrats!!! on POTD!! dear friend...this is definitely an SOS...'Silent One Sonnet'...superbly done...^WW^
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Date: 6/4/2019 9:24:00 AM
Gorgeous, my friend, Congratulations for POTD! xomo
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Date: 6/4/2019 9:01:00 AM
Congratulations on this superbly composed sonnet being awarded POTD honors my friend. Definitely a fav for me!
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Date: 6/4/2019 8:37:00 AM
"Bohemian spirit delights in harmony" you can bet on it....Congratulations SO....
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Date: 6/4/2019 8:14:00 AM
Love the verses it could be made into a song. Congrats on your POTW.
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Date: 6/4/2019 8:12:00 AM
Great imagery with this beautiful write Silent One, Congrats on POTD..
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