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Suspicion Fell On the Butler

Murder was served at the table.
The fellow is dead, not stable.
Page turned, nothing could be subtler -
Suspicion fell on the butler.

It was the salt and peppering -
It’s clear his oversteppering
was found out this night…all knives out.
Stone cold - the butler gave a shout.

The poison sealed the rim of glass
to coup de gras the loudmouth bass.
Another page was turned, we’d learn
the butler’s dead - a great concern!

The guests, now accuse each other,
but one by one they fall. Bother!
Who hates them all? Who’s caused this strife?
One’s still standing - the butler’s wife!

The reader, glares at the writer,
declares it was a nail biter.
She tells the author to drink up.
He hopes it is a loving cup.

7/21/2022
SPONSOR: Joseph May
Contest: One In Five 2
Chose #2 - SUSPICION FELL ON THE BUTLER
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James Avatar
August 6, 2022 at 12:46 PM
Congratulations on your win Kim. Very clever and thoroughly enjoyed. Emilia : )
Rodrigues Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 6:05 AM
Thank you, Emilia!
Canerdy Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 9:33 AM
So creative and expressive of EVIL! :-) Good one, Kim. CONGRATS
Rodrigues Avatar
August 2, 2022 at 10:48 AM
Thank you, Janice!
Proxenos Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 9:15 AM
Dear Kim so glad you poem was given a first win - an outstandingly clever well done. Hugs, blessings Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 7:06 PM
Thank you, Jennifer! <3
George Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 9:11 PM
Back to your poem to congratulate you on your first place win, dear Kim....
Rodrigues Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 7:06 PM
Thank you, Valsa!
May Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 9:41 AM
Nice twist to the story Kim, Very nicely penned, Congrats on your win
Rodrigues Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 7:07 PM
Thank you, Joe!
Mcintosh Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 4:31 AM
Wonderful writing. God bless you sweet friend. Congrats on your top win. Love, Gina
Rodrigues Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 6:15 AM
Thank you, Gina! Hugs ~ Kim
Flood Avatar
July 27, 2022 at 11:43 AM
Like this, Kim. I couldn’t get my brain in gear for this contest. Good luck, I’m sure this will do well. Terry
Flood Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 12:37 PM
Of course I meant this category, not the contest as a whole
Rodrigues Avatar
July 27, 2022 at 2:07 PM
Thanks, Terry!
Proxenos Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 9:44 AM
This is a definite win and reminds me of Agatha Christie and her hero Hercule Poirot, but in this poem you are the Author and the heroine, well that is how I hopes it ends. Hugs and Blessings Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 10:52 AM
Thank you kindly, Jennifer! Hugs and blessings ~ K8m
Buhagiar Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 2:01 AM
Wow. Detective Kim hits her mark. Deserves a promotion. HUgs.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 10:53 AM
LOL…thanks~ Kim
George Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 12:33 AM
What a frightful series of crimes. The tension mounts as in Sherlock Holmes detective stories.... ! Indeed this is a nail biter! All the Best Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 10:53 AM
Glad you experienced the nail biter mystery! Higs ~ Kim
Buehler Avatar
July 21, 2022 at 5:29 PM
This suspenseful poem kept me riveted throughout, Kim. Murder and mayhem with a slice of spicy humor. An excellent contest contender! :) Evelyn
Rodrigues Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 10:54 AM
Spicy humor…I like that! Hugs to you Evelyn ~ Kim
Fowler Avatar
July 21, 2022 at 2:23 PM
Hahaha Kim! Perfect entry - best wishes! Linda
Rodrigues Avatar
July 21, 2022 at 2:40 PM
Thanks, Linda! Glad you found it entertaining!
Stebbings Avatar
July 21, 2022 at 12:10 PM
Brilliant Kim, Great story well put into verse. Good luck in the contest. // Barry
Rodrigues Avatar
July 21, 2022 at 2:41 PM
Thank you, Barry! :)
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July 21, 2022 at 11:55 AM
Excellent Kim, so well thought out and put into rhyme, I have a sneaky suspicion we have a winner, you best watch your back now, cheers David
Rodrigues Avatar
July 21, 2022 at 2:41 PM
LOL! Thanks, David!
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