Survivors

Old is a good thing.
Some people never
get a chance to be old.
At what point
did I start bragging
about my age?
I don’t remember, but
here I am – 94!
Anyone that old
has survived a 
mountain of things.
We’ve been at an 
ugly stage of growing up, 
sometimes scorned, bullied,
or the butt of the joke.
We’ve lived through
awkward, embarrassing
teenage years.
We’ve been hopelessly broke,
eating things like
cheese and rice balls and
endless hot dogs and beans.
Our husbands had to
go to war and leave us
back home with babies
and small children or
we lived in Army housing 
on dusty bases in nowhere land.
We’ve survived marital 
problems and problems
with our children, jobs,
money, neighbors, health,
heartbreak, and loss.
Some of us have had 
to bury a child.
We have taken care of
aging parents and have 
seen them to their
final resting places.
We have taken care
of everyone else, 
often neglecting ourselves, 
and we have cried alone. 
But now we are old 
and can tell our story.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Sheehan Avatar
December 3, 2023 at 3:43 PM
Excellent piece. Enjoyed greatly.
Peckham Avatar
December 3, 2023 at 4:59 PM
Thank you. We've seen a lot when we get into our nineties!!
One Avatar
December 3, 2023 at 1:43 PM
So true Barbara...expressed so well
Peckham Avatar
December 3, 2023 at 2:07 PM
It sounded a bit depressing, as if that was all of life, but of course there were lots of happy times. It's just that we did survive a lot of stuff along the way. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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