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SURVIVORS OF OUR PAST

Survival In the Midst of Ignorance

My prayers are not asking you to
 
save me from my enemy.
 
My children have turned their backs.
 
They praise dance with many
 
Adversaries-
 
When they need be refuking,
 
protesting and rebuking.
 
Among-st those who fight against me-
 
be my offspring.
 
I fear not the man who
 
I already know to be the beast
 
While my eyes follow my historical foe:
 
Those created in my womb,go
 
behind my back sign treaties with known
 
enemies
 
Chiding our valuable place in history. 
 
They do not want to know how they got here-
 
They do not care.The nature 

of the beast consumes them.
 
Eyes full of temptations we 

kept their butts covered,
 
and gave them what we could never have.
 
Instead of gratitude they give us latitude  
 
we cannot reach them.
 
They love the enemy, like a favorite pet-
 
Stroking the dog and biting
 
the hand that feeds them wisdom.
 
We walked miles with no shoes -
 
Prayed for our families-
 
Now our families-prey on us
 
With every thing handed to
 
them through the struggle;
 
Our children render our efforts
 
useless and in vain.
 
Vanity be thou sanity 
 
Consuming life from 

the top shelves in cafe's...
 
Thinking non -sober thoughts-
 
Who knows why we now be despise.
 
Deaf are their ears when they hear our names;
 
Holding us accountable, For the shame. 
 
Never ready for the change.
 
My prayer now is;
 
God save me from my people:
 
The joy that settled in my
 
accomplishments is now
 
unsettled disappointment,
 
disturbing !
 
They want to have 

their cake crumbs
 
and eat them too.
 
Save us from the

 disgrace of how they
 
discount all we've sacrificed - 

We made it through
 
and we have shown our 

strength against all odds
 
How now they praise-

dance with the enemy
 
They drink no more 

from separate fountains
 
Never sat in the balcony-
 
never knew the colored section;
 
Never stood on buses.
 
Those of us who never found a soft
 
place to land in the concrete jungles;
 
 have lined your bottoms with cushion's
 
from the sacrifices and suffering we
 
endured.
 
Watching you again discount us as you
 
leave us to the ridicule of your own judgment.
 
As you praise dance with those
 
who aspire to see your detriment.
 
Never before have so many brave elders
 
have had to watch their own children rob
 
them of their glory and dignity.
 
Even an imbecilic knows when he's better off.
 
That's the sad difference between an
 
slow learner and a fool.
 
A fool never cares nor takes responsibility..
 
The slow learner finally learns.
 
And is delighted to be enlightened.
 
Where the fool continues
 
to waddle blissfully in his own ignorance -
 
Resenting all who shed light on the
 
error of his ways....
 
Those who have his best interest -
 
Become his stumbling block.  
 
Difficult now for them to blame others;
 
With bright lights shining on stupidity--
 
We give them proof-
 
blinded and overwhelmed
 
by the truth-they are not interested our story
 
Never realizing that while their
 
stubborn heads were buried-in the sand.
 
We still have to stand-- guard
 
over their protruding azzes 
 
Until my children have learned  
 
where they fit in on earth,
 
and what they are truly worth
 
they will continue " Praise-
 
Dancing" with the enemies
 
They will continue to be as eaglet's
 
flapping around the yard ,
 
clucking with the chickens...
 
never soaring-never getting off the ground
 
Bewildered by our "diminutive etymology":
 
The Elders and The Ancestors;
 
We look dumbfounded,and mutter....
 
"Where did we go Wrong" ?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 8/9/2017 4:34:00 AM
These are no abstract thoughts, no poetic imaginings. This is your life laid bare and shared. Thank you so much. I thought I was alone.
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Date: 7/11/2015 9:02:00 PM
A very touching story in poetic form. The "old people" used to say: "There is no real BITE than when your own bug bite you." Your poem gives much "food" for thought!
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Date: 1/30/2014 9:45:00 PM
WOW... Momma.. so deep and so raw and I cant even begin to know really what feel in this piece. I learn allot from you and Im happy that your in my life and I get to call you friend... an honor. Amazing write. Brave Write !
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Vicki Acquah
Date: 1/31/2014 2:08:00 AM
When people are in the background of your life cheering you on, it is wonderful when they surface to become a part of your main stream.
Date: 12/20/2013 9:39:00 AM
Dearest Vicki, you have raised so many questions in this magnificent poem of yours! We understand something in the degree we live it and I understand you very well! For all the questions you have asked I have tried to give answers through my poetry! Look at YOUTH AND OLD AGE, MAN"S LIFE, KNOW THYSELF and many more! I hope you have read my biography. Socrates said: There is only one good-knowledge and one evil-ignorance! It is true, we suffer more when hurt by our own children! Very good poem
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Vicki Acquah
Date: 12/22/2013 2:53:00 PM
CHERISHED ARE YOUR WORDS DEMETROIS-I WAS ABSORBED IN YOUR ROOF GARDEN WHAT A JOY YOU ARE TO ME -- HAVING MET YOU IS LIKE MEETING A REAL STEWARD OF THIS MOTHER EARTH. SO GLAD YOU HAVE TAKEN THE TIME TO APPRECIATE MY FEELINGS.
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