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Survival

weeping willow trees
unbreakable in grace bend
survival and hope!

June 11th,  2018

Inspired by Victor Buhagiar "Barren Branches Of a Willow Tree Die"

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/11/2019 12:21:00 AM

Besma my dearest friend where are all your beautiful poems, I haven't seen any posted since the 27th of last month and I miss them so, found this one whose words are so true. These trees will adapt to any weather in their life span and will survive, maybe humans should watch and learn! Thank-you for all your comment my friend and soul sister, poetry hugs Jennifer.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 2/23/2019 3:28:00 AM

Thank you so much dearest Jennifer for your kind and loving heart that misses loving ones.. I am simply not in the mood of writing works that meet the beauty and depths of my ardent reader.. looking forward to giving due respect and value to your beauties.. grateful for your hearty appreciation. Love and hugs.

FJ Thomas

Date: 7/10/2018 2:37:00 PM

They are quite beautiful. Lovely Besma.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 2/23/2019 3:25:00 AM

My most sincere apologies preceding my deep gratitude for your precious visit and appreciative comment, FJ Thomas.. My deepest regards. Blessings.

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/23/2018 9:20:00 AM

Definitely adding this haiku inspiring gem to my fav list. Clear and true message written by a very gifted poetess! A fav....

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/23/2018 9:37:00 AM

Thank you so much Robert for the honour and delight you bestowed upon my humble write today! I treasure your precious visits and generous feedbacks. Stay safe and blessed.

Elaine George

Date: 6/22/2018 9:53:00 AM

I am saving this one and putting it on my fav list. SENSATIONAL HAIKU. truly...Elaine

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/22/2018 1:31:00 PM

My pleasure dear Elaine! My honour to have you on my page with this precious and rewarding feedback! Thank you so much for the FAV. Stay safe and blessed.

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/21/2018 9:38:00 PM

Such graceful inspiration, dearest Besma, flows wondrously though your poetic pen, spilling a glorious message in the imagery of the willows - weeping in sadness but strong in its flexible and unbreakable branches that hold onto faith through times that challenge our devotion, trust and love.. survival and hope anchored in its roots. Beauty fills your poem and your poem fills my heart, my lovely friend. Warmest wishes and shining love always.. ~Susan p.s. a fav!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/22/2018 1:26:00 PM

Dear Susan, I'm really impressed by your gracious presence on my page and graceful comment.. I'm actually inspired by beautiful souls like you who stir our innermost and make us strive to bring out the best in us and make us aspire to higher achievements.. You are loveable and inspiring dear Susan.. Blessed to have you on the path of my heart. Stay safe and blessed.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/21/2018 3:23:00 PM

Dear Besma, your powerful haiku reflects the strong message that even when life takes us to a breaking point, hope miraculously keeps us alive! Beautiful, my friend! Hugs and love. Pandita

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/22/2018 1:02:00 PM

Dear Pandita, you are so kind to add the beauty of your refined words to my humble write. A great pleasure to greet you on my page. Shine and stay safe.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/17/2018 8:09:00 AM

I just love willow trees. We have several here in Kelowna near the lake. You are a natural for this form, I enjoyed your Haiku.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/18/2018 3:29:00 PM

Good to see you on my page Richard! Thank you so much for your generous and rewarding feedback. Stay safe and blessed.

Silent One

Date: 6/14/2018 12:03:00 PM

If we keep the faith then we learn to survive.. Great haiku Besma..

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/18/2018 3:26:00 PM

I do appreciate your uplifting feedback Silent One. Deeply humbled and delighted. Thank you so much. Stay blessed.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 6/14/2018 3:26:00 AM

Indeed... hope what a powerful word...

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/18/2018 3:22:00 PM

Thank you for your visit Pashang! My pleasure! Grateful to lovely feedback.

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/13/2018 10:51:00 AM

Besma, as look out of my window, i see a beautiful willow tree, as i read this i find inspiration, in your poem..thanks for posting..

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/13/2018 12:13:00 PM

Thank you so much Harry for your unique and genuine comment! My pleasure! So much elated and honoured. Stay blessed.

Winged Warrior

Date: 6/11/2018 10:55:00 AM

Lovely haiku Besma...inspired by a master...Mr. VB...love & light my friend...^WW^

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/12/2018 6:19:00 AM

Absolutely! My honour and delight.. thank you so much Winged Warrior for your precious visit and feedback. Stay blessed.

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/11/2018 6:03:00 AM

An inspiring Haiku...All the best Besma

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/11/2018 10:07:00 AM

My pleasure Arturo! I'm happy you enjoyed my write. Thank you so much for your elating feedback. Stay safe.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/11/2018 5:49:00 AM

Inspirational message..a beautiful poem you wrote Besma. Hope is so critical for survival..so much you said in so few words!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/11/2018 10:02:00 AM

A rewarding response dear Vijay! Good to see you on my page! Thank you dear for stopping by and feeling much humble words. Stay safe.

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 6/11/2018 4:13:00 AM

This is an inspiring poem with an inspirational message, it can also be used in humans that when our time is bad, we should have faith in our God and we should stand there with patience that surely God will finally help as He said that don t worry the help is on the way, this is a beautiful haiku of trees surviving, we should also pick up their example, good luck and thanks for commenting on my poems

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/11/2018 9:57:00 AM

You have a heart of a poet dipped in genuine faith! A profound and an uplifting response.. thank you so much Faraz for reading and appreciating. Shine and stay safe.