Surveying the Storm

variety of size, limbs
once helpless in the wind,
a haphazard torrent of leaves.
no pleasantries in rescind.

moss, plush with bouncy roots
tripartite surgery of bark,
sans clean cut.
ground level hallmark

apartments, at close inspection,
varmints inhabit an oak.
how do trees survive the dark
when susceptible to croak?

the yard with all its idiosyncrasies,
a social distancing playground
for a curious player of minecraft —
a five year old’s hardly earthbound.


4/17/2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
April 26, 2020 at 9:24 PM
Great job. Correct that some of us enjoy it more than others.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 27, 2020 at 5:04 PM
:)
Proxenos Avatar
April 21, 2020 at 1:14 PM
You do have such poetic talent Kim, and your choice of words are always elegantly strung together - well penned. Blessings, Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 27, 2020 at 5:04 PM
Thank you, Jennifer!
Trifiatis Avatar
April 21, 2020 at 7:16 AM
Verses crafted with extra care dearest, Kim! Hugs xxx
Rodrigues Avatar
April 27, 2020 at 5:04 PM
Thank you!
Krutsinger Avatar
April 21, 2020 at 1:16 AM
Wonderfully penned Kim; I wonder if this was tornado-like; it feels like it.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 21, 2020 at 7:13 AM
It whipped up pretty good. We went downstairs for awhile just to be on the safe side!
Romios Avatar
April 20, 2020 at 4:09 PM
As always, another poetic masterpiece. Panagiota xx
Rodrigues Avatar
April 20, 2020 at 5:25 PM
Thank you, sweet poet!
One Avatar
April 19, 2020 at 1:26 PM
This is a great poem..So descriptive..
Rodrigues Avatar
April 19, 2020 at 1:40 PM
Thanks so much! I value your comments!
DiMino Avatar
April 18, 2020 at 11:55 AM
Wow! Never read a more brilliant description of a storm. I was there in the fury and power of nature. I hope no one you know was seriously injured. I pray God heals and blesses.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 18, 2020 at 6:48 PM
Thanks so much, Joe! No one was injured. You see so much more when you take a stroll outside.
Buehler Avatar
April 17, 2020 at 10:58 PM
Very nicely written poem, Kim. I loved your description of the fallen oak.
Rodrigues Avatar
April 18, 2020 at 6:48 PM
Thank you, sweet friend!
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