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Surveying the Storm

variety of size, limbs once helpless in the wind, a haphazard torrent of leaves. no pleasantries in rescind. moss, plush with bouncy roots tripartite surgery of bark, sans clean cut. ground level hallmark apartments, at close inspection, varmints inhabit an oak. how do trees survive the dark when susceptible to croak? the yard with all its idiosyncrasies, a social distancing playground for a curious player of minecraft — a five year old’s hardly earthbound. 4/17/2020

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Date: 4/26/2020 9:24:00 PM
Great job. Correct that some of us enjoy it more than others.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/27/2020 5:04:00 PM
:)
Date: 4/21/2020 1:14:00 PM
You do have such poetic talent Kim, and your choice of words are always elegantly strung together - well penned. Blessings, Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/27/2020 5:04:00 PM
Thank you, Jennifer!
Date: 4/21/2020 7:16:00 AM
Verses crafted with extra care dearest, Kim! Hugs xxx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/27/2020 5:04:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 4/21/2020 1:16:00 AM
Wonderfully penned Kim; I wonder if this was tornado-like; it feels like it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/21/2020 7:13:00 AM
It whipped up pretty good. We went downstairs for awhile just to be on the safe side!
Date: 4/20/2020 4:09:00 PM
As always, another poetic masterpiece. Panagiota xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/20/2020 5:25:00 PM
Thank you, sweet poet!
Date: 4/19/2020 1:26:00 PM
This is a great poem..So descriptive..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/19/2020 1:40:00 PM
Thanks so much! I value your comments!
Date: 4/18/2020 11:55:00 AM
Wow! Never read a more brilliant description of a storm. I was there in the fury and power of nature. I hope no one you know was seriously injured. I pray God heals and blesses.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/18/2020 6:48:00 PM
Thanks so much, Joe! No one was injured. You see so much more when you take a stroll outside.
Date: 4/17/2020 10:58:00 PM
Very nicely written poem, Kim. I loved your description of the fallen oak.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/18/2020 6:48:00 PM
Thank you, sweet friend!

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