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Surreptitious Breaths

Silken linens scented of 

  last night's rendezvous,

     still wafting midst

         reticent moments, 

cognac and aromatic

   candlelight burning 'neath

      surreptitious breaths, 

  as we unfurled

     sultry seduction's poetry 

              'tween clandestine shadows

Copyright © Paloma P | Year Posted 2016

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Jannie Breedt Date: 11/10/2016 1:26:00 PM Phew, riskè . It makes me want to reach for the bedlamp to switch off. Meaning its so wonderfully intimate. Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 10/13/2016 11:16:00 AM Wow! This will be going to my favs, Paloma! Sultry seduction's poetry has reached its aim. You paint the situation in delightful poetic language. ~ Regards // paul Login to Reply Paloma P Date: 10/13/2016 2:38:00 PM I'm humbled Paul, many thanks!

Phillip Garcia Date: 10/12/2016 8:33:00 PM There you go again. I don't sigh because I think it's cliche and I'm too cool for that (see backwards cap) but I almost did with this. Lovely - now I'm going to dictionary.com to translate this to Texan so I can fully understand it Login to Reply Paloma P Date: 10/13/2016 5:26:00 AM Are you sassin' me? Had to laugh at 'fancy pants' :) Phillip Garcia Date: 10/12/2016 10:04:00 PM Well yessum we surely do. Y'all fancy type just lasso circles 'round us with yer fancy pants words Paloma P Date: 10/12/2016 8:39:00 PM Oh c'mon you get it, no need to translate to Texan, I didn't realize you lone star boys spoke a foreign language. :)