Paloma P Poet Free verse

Surreptitious Breaths

Silken linens scented of 

  last night's rendezvous,

     still wafting midst

         reticent moments, 

cognac and aromatic

   candlelight burning 'neath

      surreptitious breaths, 

  as we unfurled

     sultry seduction's poetry 

              'tween clandestine shadows

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Jannie Breedt November 10, 2016 at 1:26 PM Phew, riskè . It makes me want to reach for the bedlamp to switch off. Meaning its so wonderfully intimate.

Paul Callus October 13, 2016 at 11:16 AM Wow! This will be going to my favs, Paloma! Sultry seduction's poetry has reached its aim. You paint the situation in delightful poetic language. ~ Regards // paul Paloma P October 13, 2016 at 2:38 PM I'm humbled Paul, many thanks!

Phillip Garcia October 12, 2016 at 8:33 PM There you go again. I don't sigh because I think it's cliche and I'm too cool for that (see backwards cap) but I almost did with this. Lovely - now I'm going to dictionary.com to translate this to Texan so I can fully understand it Paloma P October 13, 2016 at 5:26 AM Are you sassin' me? Had to laugh at 'fancy pants' :) Phillip Garcia October 12, 2016 at 10:04 PM Well yessum we surely do. Y'all fancy type just lasso circles 'round us with yer fancy pants words Paloma P October 12, 2016 at 8:39 PM Oh c'mon you get it, no need to translate to Texan, I didn't realize you lone star boys spoke a foreign language. :)