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Surreptitious Breaths

Silken linens scented of last night's rendezvous, still wafting midst reticent moments, cognac and aromatic candlelight burning 'neath surreptitious breaths, as we unfurled sultry seduction's poetry 'tween clandestine shadows

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Jannie Breedt

Date: 11/10/2016 1:26:00 PM

Phew, riskè . It makes me want to reach for the bedlamp to switch off. Meaning its so wonderfully intimate.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/13/2016 11:16:00 AM

Wow! This will be going to my favs, Paloma! Sultry seduction's poetry has reached its aim. You paint the situation in delightful poetic language. ~ Regards // paul

Paloma P
Date: 10/13/2016 2:38:00 PM

I'm humbled Paul, many thanks!

Phillip Garcia

Date: 10/12/2016 8:33:00 PM

There you go again. I don't sigh because I think it's cliche and I'm too cool for that (see backwards cap) but I almost did with this. Lovely - now I'm going to dictionary.com to translate this to Texan so I can fully understand it

Paloma P
Date: 10/13/2016 5:26:00 AM

Are you sassin' me? Had to laugh at 'fancy pants' :)

Phillip Garcia
Date: 10/12/2016 10:04:00 PM

Well yessum we surely do. Y'all fancy type just lasso circles 'round us with yer fancy pants words

Paloma P
Date: 10/12/2016 8:39:00 PM

Oh c'mon you get it, no need to translate to Texan, I didn't realize you lone star boys spoke a foreign language. :)