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"SURRENDER" FROM MY ROOF TOP GARDEN, 19 JUNE 2017, MY PHOTO, ©

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Looked at her eyes

Cupid's arrows hit his heart

Total surrender!




© Demetrios Trifiatis
     19 June 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 6/19/2017 5:47:00 PM
Sweet!
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/20/2017 7:55:00 AM
How sweet of you dear, Andrea to visit and comment! Thank you!
Date: 6/19/2017 12:27:00 PM
Estupendo! ...
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/19/2017 12:45:00 PM
I think i have to learn some Spanish so could be able to cope with your comments my friend, Probir! haha! Thank you!
Date: 6/19/2017 10:35:00 AM
This is the mystery of loving eyes hiding arrows to make other surrender my dear lovely friend. A genius expression. Loved always, bl
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/19/2017 12:46:00 PM
Thank you so much for visiting and commenting dear friend, BLD! You too generous!
Date: 6/19/2017 7:10:00 AM
Magical my friend! Great penmanship 7+
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/19/2017 7:17:00 AM
Thank you my friend, WW. Happy you appreciated it!
Date: 6/19/2017 7:08:00 AM
- A gem of love, beautiful my dear friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/19/2017 7:09:00 AM
Dearest Anne-Lise! How marvelous to receive your visit and lovely comment! Hugs Thank you!
Date: 6/19/2017 6:35:00 AM
Simply beautiful, dear friend! I hope that you're well and may God keep you safe always, Sincerely, Ligella
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Ligella Mandraki
Date: 6/21/2017 10:05:00 AM
Hello, dear Demetrios! I am very well; thank you for asking. It has been a while; I apologise for the late reply, but study and work have kept me busy these days. However, I have two more subjects to complete, and then I'm done with this one and continue to the next level. Take very good care, dear friend !! I shall drop by very soon for another visit! May God bless you alway, Sincerely, Ligella
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/19/2017 7:08:00 AM
Ligella, what a wonderful surprise! How are you my dear? I am delighted to see you! I hope all your projects have come to fruition! God bless you!
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