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Surrender

the mountains grind to a chalk white dust as an endless train rolls across our jeweled eye and the stars scatter in the darkness time slowly tires then drifts to sleep while our fatal companion gathers his last soul before sealing the gate alone in eternal silence we relive untold stories and trace forgotten images on our lips until finally we surrender and erupt in a torrent of galactic splendor

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/16/2015 8:18:00 AM
Wow this is sublime, rendered in awesome terminology and i admire how u summed it up in intellectual terms of heavenly delight in the last stanza. So the wry yet artsy beginning has a poetic cosmic ending here. Super nice to read u again.
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Ralph Mason
Date: 3/16/2015 8:29:00 PM
thank you for you kind words. Warm thoughts, Ralph

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