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Surrender

The waves were subtle As you led me in Half moon Full moon I can't quite remember But your hand was strong Supportive was your praise Then Backstroke in November My mind was muddled But you let me be All me Just me You were tender Your tempting tongue Was impeccable All I could do Was serenely surrender

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/29/2012 12:28:00 PM
A very sweet write, dear Karen... very creative! Love and big hugs, Jack xox
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Date: 9/27/2012 9:28:00 AM
SO ENJOYED READING YOUR CREATIVE WRITE TONITE KAREN .. LOVELY LINES QUITE IMPRESSIVE LUV .. THANKXX FOR YOUR SWEET CRITIQUE' TOO ..
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