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Surrender

'Time's restless surrender is but a charade,
tender and giving, but meant to dissuade'...by poet

If Time has its way, we must surrender
to each moment passing swiftly beyond
But my preference is as contender
to own these moments: for I've become fond
of those I create and Time would abscond.

Time, quite clever, will often masquerade
full of sunshine while hiding in deep shade
Always pretending: a kiss and goodbye
Surrender is sought, but will never trade
Its fleetness for grandeur, for Time must fly.

Wistful, I think of things I might have done
Those days when Time appeared to hesitate 
 Instead I thought life was blue skies and sun
All those wondrous plans could easily wait
For then, life and I were feeling quite sate.

But now I understand: Time always lies.
Its future depends on ways to devise
stolen moments into those that beguile
and so we surrender to Time's disguise
and watch it fly quickly, wearing a smile.

April 7, 2023
for 'Writing Challenge--S Words poetry contest'
by Constance La France
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1st

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Date: 4/13/2023 8:49:00 PM
We "watch it fly quickly, wearing a smile" - true. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/13/2023 8:00:00 PM
A wonderful Dizain poem about time Ann, it’s so true the older we get the quicker times flies, we can only surrender and - “watch it fly quickly, wearing a smile.” Congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest… Belle
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Date: 4/12/2023 2:51:00 PM
Never give up! Never surrender! Nicely done Ann. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 4/12/2023 1:31:00 PM
Congratulations, ANN. The soothing effect that your great poem had on me lasted for quite some time. It is not easy, but it is possible to forgive someone.
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Date: 4/12/2023 9:59:00 AM
Ann, thank you so much for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge, congratulations, I love your quote !
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Ann Peck
Date: 4/12/2023 1:38:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Constance!
Date: 4/12/2023 9:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative write. Time always has it's way as it lies. Love This One. Have a blessed day writing away.............
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Date: 4/12/2023 9:46:00 AM
- So true and beautifully written, Ann :) - Congratulations on 1st place in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 4/7/2023 6:16:00 PM
Beautiful poetry, Ann, you seem to write dizains with ease, I find them tough...
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Ann Peck
Date: 4/8/2023 8:34:00 AM
Thanks, Jo. I guess I do find them easier than some forms that I've managed to slaughter, and some that I won't even try. :)

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