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Surprise Party

Her friends, encircled, waited there, Anticipation in the air. Then in she walked, with widened eyes; The party was a true surprise. She laughed and each of us embraced, Her shock by happiness replaced. The wine was poured, we had a toast To really, what had mattered most – That all her closest friends did heed Her husband’s call; he did succeed To gather all to what might be The coolest room you’d ever see. We talked, we drank, we laughed, we ate, A lovely night to celebrate The birthday of a longtime friend Which I was happy to attend.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/30/2017 10:15:00 PM
Another great poem that took me there. Really nice. As always your rhyming and meter are perfect. You are the rhyming Queen, no doubt!!.................Pat
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Date: 11/28/2017 7:58:00 PM
Sounds like a nice gathering :)
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Date: 11/28/2017 6:55:00 PM
oh how wonderful Ilene! I can just picture her face when she saw you all gathered together! I hope you had a wonderful day:-) hugs Jan xx
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