Kim Rodrigues Poet Haiku

Surprise

Mama's surprise child —
from our beds we shout out names
like the Walton’s did

7/10/2019
Chantelle Cooke’s Childhood Memories Poetry Contest

Since you had one slot left I wrote a short one

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Alexis Y. July 12, 2019 at 5:18 PM Hi Kim, This is a good entry for the contest theme. Who didn't love the Walton's. Best wishes in the contest:-) Alexis Kim Rodrigues July 12, 2019 at 8:39 PM Thank you, Alexis! :)

Quoth Theraven July 12, 2019 at 9:38 AM Kim, I love this poem. Watching The Walton's - The Homecoming: A Christmas Story with gifted actors Patricia Neal and Richard Thomas is a yearly holiday treat. -Richard Kim Rodrigues July 12, 2019 at 10:01 AM Thank you, Richard! Our memory of that night was so much fun too!

Jan Allison July 11, 2019 at 6:06 AM sure made me smile Kim gosh I remember the Walton's... it must have taken ages to say goodnight lol:-) hugs jan xx Kim Rodrigues July 12, 2019 at 10:01 AM Right?! LOL! So much love!

Caren Krutsinger July 10, 2019 at 8:14 PM This one had such a happy feeling for me; I loved the Waltons! Kim Rodrigues July 10, 2019 at 10:36 PM Thank you! And this sister’s name was Amy which also went along nicely with the spoof SNL did of the Walton’s using instead the Carter White House...goodnight Amy.