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Surfing Grandma

Defying mental blight of old age plight Grandmother surmounts life's tides with no fright See her surf midst glee Facing waves of sea... Let's hang her picture marked by blest faith*-flight.
*Matt 15:28 Then Jesus answered and said unto her, O woman, great is thy faith: be it unto thee even as thou wilt... July 18, 2022 3rd place, "Limerick" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Lisa YY; judged on 7/18/2022.

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Date: 7/21/2022 3:33:00 PM
Perfect poem Beata! And perfect accompanying verse. Congratulations on your win! Linda
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Date: 7/20/2022 6:49:00 AM
Fun and piety mingled. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/19/2022 1:52:00 PM
cute one, Beata. Congrats for the win
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Date: 7/19/2022 12:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a wild "SURFING GRANDMA" write. Glad you have a picture of this. Today be blessed.................
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Date: 7/19/2022 6:24:00 AM
I don’t think I’ve ever read a Limerick that read like hi-brought poetry. And that is meant as a compliment. Well done, Beata. Terry
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Date: 7/18/2022 6:39:00 PM
Fantastic Limerick Beata, with faith one can do anything at all, the grandmother should pray that she doesn’t fall… Belle
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