Beata Agustin Poet Limerick

Surfing Grandma

Defying mental blight of old age plight
Grandmother surmounts life's tides with no fright
See her surf midst glee 
Facing waves of sea...
Let's hang her picture marked by blest faith*-flight. 

*Matt 15:28 Then Jesus answered and said unto her, O woman, great is thy faith: be it unto thee even as thou wilt...

July 18, 2022
3rd place, "Limerick" Poetry Writing Contest
Sponsored by Lisa YY; judged on 7/18/2022.

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Linda Alice Fowler July 21, 2022 at 3:33 PM Perfect poem Beata! And perfect accompanying verse. Congratulations on your win! Linda

Christuraj Alex July 20, 2022 at 6:49 AM Fun and piety mingled. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich July 19, 2022 at 1:52 PM cute one, Beata. Congrats for the win

Paula Goldsmith July 19, 2022 at 12:02 PM Congratulations on your win. What a wild "SURFING GRANDMA" write. Glad you have a picture of this. Today be blessed.................

Terry Flood July 19, 2022 at 6:24 AM I don’t think I’ve ever read a Limerick that read like hi-brought poetry. And that is meant as a compliment. Well done, Beata. Terry

Beryl Edmonds July 18, 2022 at 6:39 PM Fantastic Limerick Beata, with faith one can do anything at all, the grandmother should pray that she doesn’t fall… Belle