Sharon Ruebel Poet Chastushka

Surfer Chick

He never stopped preaching
About the color of my hair
So I kept right on bleaching
and now there's nothing there 











Contest: Bad hair day
Sponsored by Rick Parise
Form: Chastushka

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Freddie Robinson Jr. January 7, 2017 at 10:23 AM Very witty and funny poem, Sharon. This one resonates still ... six years later. Your girl has good legs, though no hair. Love this poem a whole lot. Sharp pen you wield. Love and peace to you.

Jon A Cavanaugh November 25, 2012 at 6:13 AM Love this poem. Absolutely hilarious. What extremely witty humor.

James Fraser January 30, 2011 at 1:23 PM Ooo I chuckled at this one Sharon, nice one....:)

Debbie Guzzi January 27, 2011 at 6:33 AM cute one! Light & Love

Joe Flach January 20, 2011 at 11:03 AM Funny!! Hair today, gone tomorrow. The story of my pate. ;-) Joe

Michael J. Falotico January 17, 2011 at 3:26 PM Good one for the contest my dear... sorry to make you tear up, then dont read "Spring In Winter" it may do the same. "Unbreakable" is a happy one I promise...with love Michael

Sara Kendrick January 17, 2011 at 1:11 PM Got a good chuckle..I don't know who won in this one..Enjoyed..I am glad that I chose it to read this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by my work..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown January 17, 2011 at 11:28 AM I am stopping by today to thank you for your kind comments Shar. It is always a pleasure to read your wonderful poetry. Love, Carol

Eamon Duffin January 17, 2011 at 10:52 AM Hi Sharon. thanks for the visit. Funny how men and women write the same except for we blame women and you blame men. Either way, this is a great take on the subject and very witty. Best of luck in the contest. Eamon

Phyllis Babcock January 16, 2011 at 11:45 AM This made me smile and remind me of an old school friend. Never did use much bleach myself due to allergies. Cute one. God Bless Phyl

Carolyn Devonshire January 15, 2011 at 8:19 AM Laughed out loud at this one, Sharon. What a great entry for the bad hair day contest! Best wishes for success. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown January 14, 2011 at 11:08 AM I am so happy to feel good enough to be reading poetry today. It was a pleasure to read your excellent write Shar. Love, Carol

Jancarl Campi January 14, 2011 at 10:06 AM Hi Sharon, I am pleased that you liked my poem "Three Gifts" I hope you do well in the Bad hair day contest! You deserve a win!!! Take care, Jancarl

Liz Walsh January 14, 2011 at 4:03 AM Love this! Liz

Andrea Dietrich January 13, 2011 at 9:29 PM I love this one. Why? Because I nearly lost my hair for overbleaching it.That is why I had to cut it off and wear the wig that I mentioned in MY chastushka!! hahaha. LUv, Andrea