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Surfer Chick

He never stopped preaching
About the color of my hair
So I kept right on bleaching
and now there's nothing there 











Contest: Bad hair day
Sponsored by Rick Parise
Form: Chastushka

Copyright © Sharon Ruebel | Year Posted 2011

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Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 1/7/2017 10:23:00 AM Very witty and funny poem, Sharon. This one resonates still ... six years later. Your girl has good legs, though no hair. Love this poem a whole lot. Sharp pen you wield. Love and peace to you. Login to Reply

Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 11/25/2012 6:13:00 AM Love this poem. Absolutely hilarious. What extremely witty humor. Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 1/30/2011 1:23:00 PM Ooo I chuckled at this one Sharon, nice one....:) Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 1/27/2011 6:33:00 AM cute one! Light & Love Login to Reply

Joe Flach Date: 1/20/2011 11:03:00 AM Funny!! Hair today, gone tomorrow. The story of my pate. ;-) Joe Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 1/17/2011 3:26:00 PM Good one for the contest my dear... sorry to make you tear up, then dont read "Spring In Winter" it may do the same. "Unbreakable" is a happy one I promise...with love Michael Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/17/2011 1:11:00 PM Got a good chuckle..I don't know who won in this one..Enjoyed..I am glad that I chose it to read this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by my work..Sara Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 1/17/2011 11:28:00 AM I am stopping by today to thank you for your kind comments Shar. It is always a pleasure to read your wonderful poetry. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Eamon Duffin Date: 1/17/2011 10:52:00 AM Hi Sharon. thanks for the visit. Funny how men and women write the same except for we blame women and you blame men. Either way, this is a great take on the subject and very witty. Best of luck in the contest. Eamon Login to Reply

Phyllis Babcock Date: 1/16/2011 11:45:00 AM This made me smile and remind me of an old school friend. Never did use much bleach myself due to allergies. Cute one. God Bless Phyl Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 1/15/2011 8:19:00 AM Laughed out loud at this one, Sharon. What a great entry for the bad hair day contest! Best wishes for success. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 1/14/2011 11:08:00 AM I am so happy to feel good enough to be reading poetry today. It was a pleasure to read your excellent write Shar. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Jancarl Campi Date: 1/14/2011 10:06:00 AM Hi Sharon, I am pleased that you liked my poem "Three Gifts" I hope you do well in the Bad hair day contest! You deserve a win!!! Take care, Jancarl Login to Reply

Liz Walsh Date: 1/14/2011 4:03:00 AM Love this! Liz Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/13/2011 9:29:00 PM I love this one. Why? Because I nearly lost my hair for overbleaching it.That is why I had to cut it off and wear the wig that I mentioned in MY chastushka!! hahaha. LUv, Andrea Login to Reply