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Surfer Chick

He never stopped preaching About the color of my hair So I kept right on bleaching and now there's nothing there Contest: Bad hair day Sponsored by Rick Parise Form: Chastushka

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 1/7/2017 10:23:00 AM

Very witty and funny poem, Sharon. This one resonates still ... six years later. Your girl has good legs, though no hair. Love this poem a whole lot. Sharp pen you wield. Love and peace to you.

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 11/25/2012 6:13:00 AM

Love this poem. Absolutely hilarious. What extremely witty humor.

James Fraser

Date: 1/30/2011 1:23:00 PM

Ooo I chuckled at this one Sharon, nice one....:)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/27/2011 6:33:00 AM

cute one! Light & Love

Joe Flach

Date: 1/20/2011 11:03:00 AM

Funny!! Hair today, gone tomorrow. The story of my pate. ;-) Joe

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/17/2011 3:26:00 PM

Good one for the contest my dear... sorry to make you tear up, then dont read "Spring In Winter" it may do the same. "Unbreakable" is a happy one I promise...with love Michael

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/17/2011 1:11:00 PM

Got a good chuckle..I don't know who won in this one..Enjoyed..I am glad that I chose it to read this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by my work..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/17/2011 11:28:00 AM

I am stopping by today to thank you for your kind comments Shar. It is always a pleasure to read your wonderful poetry. Love, Carol

Eamon Duffin

Date: 1/17/2011 10:52:00 AM

Hi Sharon. thanks for the visit. Funny how men and women write the same except for we blame women and you blame men. Either way, this is a great take on the subject and very witty. Best of luck in the contest. Eamon

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/16/2011 11:45:00 AM

This made me smile and remind me of an old school friend. Never did use much bleach myself due to allergies. Cute one. God Bless Phyl

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/15/2011 8:19:00 AM

Laughed out loud at this one, Sharon. What a great entry for the bad hair day contest! Best wishes for success. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/14/2011 11:08:00 AM

I am so happy to feel good enough to be reading poetry today. It was a pleasure to read your excellent write Shar. Love, Carol

Jancarl Campi

Date: 1/14/2011 10:06:00 AM

Hi Sharon, I am pleased that you liked my poem "Three Gifts" I hope you do well in the Bad hair day contest! You deserve a win!!! Take care, Jancarl

Liz Walsh

Date: 1/14/2011 4:03:00 AM

Love this! Liz

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/13/2011 9:29:00 PM

I love this one. Why? Because I nearly lost my hair for overbleaching it.That is why I had to cut it off and wear the wig that I mentioned in MY chastushka!! hahaha. LUv, Andrea