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you surface me, dear, like sea shells on sand- tidal waves engulf the shore like your grace encompasses me- grains of love remain… TABLEAU PRINTS 5 syllables in each line 30 syllables total howmanysyllables.com Nette Onclaud October 31, 2017

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Date: 11/8/2017 3:19:00 PM
beautiful, seamless poetry which deserves a high win and big congrats.. thanks for the inspiration,lou...
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/9/2017 4:40:00 AM
thank you so much sweet Nette for my amazing placement!!! Be blessed :)
Date: 11/6/2017 11:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your fine win, Laura.
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/9/2017 4:39:00 AM
thank you Subimal :)
Date: 11/6/2017 8:12:00 PM
Well done, Laura, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/9/2017 4:38:00 AM
many thanks lovely Eve :)
Date: 11/6/2017 4:32:00 PM
Congrats on your win! Lovely image!
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/9/2017 4:38:00 AM
thank you sweet Kim :)
Date: 11/6/2017 3:05:00 PM
this one was so deserving of a high placement , Laura. Loving this one again!! Congrats.
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/9/2017 4:38:00 AM
aww thank you lovely lady :)
Date: 11/6/2017 1:58:00 PM
Wonderful imagery, Laura - especially enjoyed the final line! Congrats on your win. Regards, John.
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/9/2017 4:38:00 AM
many thanks dear John :)
Date: 11/1/2017 6:02:00 PM
Exceptional verse, Laura. May be the best I have seen in this contest!! Such awesome metaphors.
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Lu Loo
Date: 11/9/2017 4:38:00 AM
thank you sweet Andrea :)

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