V. Deepa Poet Sijo

Supreme Entangled Ardent Couple

I desire to become a fridge, to freeze all sweet warm kisses. 
Often release the treasure, and quiver again with pleasure..
With my conceited paramour,dreading his evanescence.

23-5-2020

~DEEPA~

Second place in the Contest.
Note:* 'Let the pens flow-Sijo' Poetry Contest*
Sponsor: Jenish Somadas

First place in the Contest.:-)
Note2:BRIAN'S select D,any form,any theme
Sponsored by Brian Strand

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Andrea Dietrich June 13, 2020 at 6:43 PM very clever one you wrote! Congrats on the win. V. Deepa June 14, 2020 at 1:44 PM Hello mam, Thank very much for your kind words.:-)Best wishes for you too. Keep writing.:-) Take care.Warm regards~Deepa.

Aditi Mishra June 12, 2020 at 6:54 AM This is such a multi-layered verse that creates worlds of its own, and romance drips through it. Congratulations on your win Deepa :) V. Deepa June 12, 2020 at 7:44 AM Thanks a lot mam for deeply analysing my work .I am pleased to read this lovely review:-) Take care.Much love~Deepa

Jenish Somadas June 12, 2020 at 12:53 AM Lovely romantic write..Congratulations Deepa.. V. Deepa June 12, 2020 at 3:54 AM Thankyou very much Sir:-) I am glad to receive kind appreciation and encouragement from you. Well,it was your contest which initiated me to write this piece.:-) Best wishes for all your poems too.Keep doing great works. Take care.Warm regards~Deepa.

Krish Radhakrishna May 23, 2020 at 1:13 PM Deepa, very nice! There are so many emotional facets to this short poem, I had to read it a few times to get to grips with them all! Very sensuous too! Well done! V. Deepa May 24, 2020 at 2:28 AM Thankyou so much sir.:-) Sometimes my imagination do works.:-)I am very pleased that my work impressed you. Thanks for re-reading untill you got the point :-)

Paul Callus May 23, 2020 at 6:50 AM This is such a lovely romantic poem, V. I doubt if your passionate love will ever just vanish or fade! ~ Regards // paul V. Deepa May 23, 2020 at 6:58 AM Oh ..thankyou for stopping by, and appreciating my work sir.:-) And thanks for your warm blessings too.:-) Take care.With regards~Deepa