Supper Time

Fruit or chocolate,my favorite choice,
Chocolate with icing,fruit cake with raisin,with spice, 
Not too dry,saturated with wine,
Dinner is finished,can't wait till supper time,
For the kids,ice-cream and chocolate cake,
But a cup of coffee with fruit I will take,
Thumbs up Mamma P,this slice is great,
Keep getting better,every time you bake,
Teeth sink in,hmmmmm,savor the taste,
Hold it over a saucer,not a drop will waste,
Ants looking angry,hungry look on their face,
Sorry lads,just licked the last crumb from my plate,
Brush my teeth after some poems I read,
Yawn,good night Poetry Soup,I'm off to bed....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 12/24/2012 10:47:00 AM
Nice little time capsule you've given us. Enjoyed. -Dean
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Richard Palmer
Date: 12/24/2012 2:29:00 PM
thanks Dean,enjoy your holiday
Date: 12/22/2012 1:19:00 PM
Hmmm now I want chocolate cake! ~$ho~.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 12/22/2012 2:31:00 PM
GET A GLASS OF MILK TOO,LOL,THANKS SHONIE
Date: 11/26/2012 6:05:00 PM
Very tasty poem Richard. I enjoyed every word of it. Thanks for sharing. Thanks for your revealing the inner meaning of my Tanka Kiss of Death. Your comment is brilliant. -Mohammad
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Richard Palmer
Date: 11/26/2012 8:39:00 PM
thank you very much Mohammad,I
Date: 11/23/2012 4:45:00 AM
Lovely, Richard. I enjoyed reading this to the max. Gave me a warm cozy feeling! :) Thanks for sharing!
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Richard Palmer
Date: 11/24/2012 10:43:00 AM
you are welcome Eileen,thanks much
Date: 11/18/2012 11:14:00 PM
hmm. this is so tasty ..good nite to you my dear poet..thank you for your great share..<3<3<3 Sk
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Richard Palmer
Date: 11/19/2012 7:23:00 AM
THANKS SK,GREAT HAVING YOU FOR SUPPER LOL
Date: 11/17/2012 7:07:00 PM
Loved reading this one. How do you get so many people to read your poetry? It's obviously good... But I couldn't find that many in a life time? Ps. When your done telling me... Please hand me some of what your eating. You made me hungry... LOL
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Richard Palmer
Date: 11/19/2012 7:22:00 AM
read and comment on as much person poems as you can and from your material is good,you got a fan,hope it helps,thanks Carol
Date: 11/17/2012 2:12:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this poem for it sounds like you have a sweet tooth too. Nothing better than coffee and cake before bed time. love phyl
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Richard Palmer
Date: 11/17/2012 2:20:00 PM
thanks Phy,rabbit tooth lol
Date: 11/15/2012 6:09:00 PM
so charming..sounds very homey! I have never been to Jamaica! LIght & Love
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Richard Palmer
Date: 11/15/2012 6:11:00 PM
thanks Debbie,its about time
Date: 11/15/2012 3:30:00 PM
Hi Richard - I'm enjoying your tasty experience through your well-crafted poem. Have to keep those ants at bay! Thanks for sharing. - Gail
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Richard Palmer
Date: 11/15/2012 3:53:00 PM
lol thanks Gail,yes we do lol
Date: 11/12/2012 10:38:00 AM
Warm write my friend. Nothing short of heartwarming and of course now the whole soup is hungry while you sleep lol. Enjoyed my poet brother. Michael
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Richard Palmer
Date: 11/13/2012 3:32:00 PM
thanks Michael,have enough for everyone,breakfast lol
Date: 11/12/2012 10:04:00 AM
What a way to end the day man, I like your words, awesome flow. Read ;{>
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Richard Palmer
Date: 11/13/2012 3:31:00 PM
thanks David
Date: 11/12/2012 8:07:00 AM
Lucky I arrived at your supper time, Richard!! Jag
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Richard Palmer
Date: 11/12/2012 8:11:00 AM
you are welcome JAG,have a slice bro
Date: 11/11/2012 9:02:00 PM
Hungry were you? :) I really want chocolate cake with icing now...thanks! hahaha. I dig~ Cheers, Sharon
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Richard Palmer
Date: 11/12/2012 5:26:00 AM
thanks Sharon,come get a slice lol
Date: 11/11/2012 11:26:00 AM
That sounds like a great tasty supper time. loved the read. yep, in my state we called it supper too. But here in Utah they call it dinner.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 11/11/2012 2:19:00 PM
lol,thanks Andrea,dinner or supper,tasty treat
Date: 11/11/2012 5:45:00 AM
enjoyed your wonderful poem Richard, love elizabeth
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Richard Palmer
Date: 11/11/2012 8:08:00 AM
thanks much Elizabeth
Date: 11/10/2012 8:41:00 AM
As I am reading your poem my wife is upstairs baking. Talk about special effects. Delicious poem Richard.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/11/2012 6:58:00 PM
I had my cake and ate it, delicious.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 11/10/2012 11:41:00 AM
lol so you have your own Mamma P,LOL,enjoy your cake Richard,thanks
Date: 11/10/2012 6:20:00 AM
I'm drooling after reading this one... a scrumptious write! Cheers
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Richard Palmer
Date: 11/10/2012 11:30:00 AM
mouth water running down your beard,lol,thanks Jack
Date: 11/10/2012 5:19:00 AM
Lol, off to bed to you. Funny write, Richard. Your desserts sound yummy. Would love to have some chocolate cake right now :)) Love ya, Toquyen
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Richard Palmer
Date: 11/10/2012 10:00:00 AM
sending a slice over girl,lol,thanks much Toquyen
Date: 11/9/2012 8:04:00 PM
Richard, now I'm hungry... and my sweet tooth is acting up... , thank you for sharing your poem, always :-) PD
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Richard Palmer
Date: 11/10/2012 8:10:00 AM
hush,lol,thanks PD
Date: 11/9/2012 5:33:00 PM
Ahhh...Fruit cake is delicious this time of year..Enjoyed reading this time of year..Thanks for stopping by..Sara..Glad to know that you are diversifying and trying new forms..
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Richard Palmer
Date: 11/10/2012 8:02:00 AM
yes I am Sara thank you oxox
Date: 11/9/2012 2:59:00 PM
You men and your tummies! It's been said the way to a man's heart is through his stomach. Can't argue that! Great for a smile Richard.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 11/9/2012 5:40:00 PM
lol lol yes we are Elizabeth,thanks much
Date: 11/9/2012 1:10:00 PM
Your chocolate is Devine, Richie and made me hunger, mouth watering,fruit cake saturated with wine, i will take,waiting upon supper time, with a cup of coffee and fruit, plz Mamma P keep up the good bake, two thumbs up too a great piece having ice-cream, I say who can't have your cake and eat It too!!!,I loved it. And good night, don't let the Ants bite....... Lol Lol
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Richard Palmer
Date: 11/9/2012 5:37:00 PM
THANKS CARMA,stepping on the ants lol
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 11/9/2012 2:18:00 PM
Like SUGAR N' SPICE...
Date: 11/9/2012 12:19:00 PM
A writer of all, a master of none but...I know when I read a poem if I have enjoyed it. Now I have read yours and I have indeed enjoyed it and your supper Richard. I wish you a wonderful weekend and hope you find much inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Richard Palmer
Date: 11/9/2012 5:30:00 PM
thanks Carol
Date: 11/9/2012 12:19:00 PM
...... Now I got sweet ideas .... chocolate .. new boiled coffee .. chocolate .. new boiled coffee .. chocolate .... I love chocolate!!! Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise
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Richard Palmer
Date: 11/9/2012 5:30:00 PM
lol sweet tooth Anne,thanks much dear
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