Richard Palmer Poet Rhyme

Supper Time

Fruit or chocolate,my favorite choice,
Chocolate with icing,fruit cake with raisin,with spice, 
Not too dry,saturated with wine,
Dinner is finished,can't wait till supper time,
For the kids,ice-cream and chocolate cake,
But a cup of coffee with fruit I will take,
Thumbs up Mamma P,this slice is great,
Keep getting better,every time you bake,
Teeth sink in,hmmmmm,savor the taste,
Hold it over a saucer,not a drop will waste,
Ants looking angry,hungry look on their face,
Sorry lads,just licked the last crumb from my plate,
Brush my teeth after some poems I read,
Yawn,good night Poetry Soup,I'm off to bed....

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Robert Ludden December 24, 2012 at 10:47 AM Nice little time capsule you've given us. Enjoyed. -Dean Richard Palmer December 24, 2012 at 2:29 PM thanks Dean,enjoy your holiday

Shonie Griffin December 22, 2012 at 1:19 PM Hmmm now I want chocolate cake! ~$ho~. Richard Palmer December 22, 2012 at 2:31 PM GET A GLASS OF MILK TOO,LOL,THANKS SHONIE

Mohammad Yamin November 26, 2012 at 6:05 PM Very tasty poem Richard. I enjoyed every word of it. Thanks for sharing. Thanks for your revealing the inner meaning of my Tanka Kiss of Death. Your comment is brilliant. -Mohammad Richard Palmer November 26, 2012 at 8:39 PM thank you very much Mohammad,I

Eileen Manassian November 23, 2012 at 4:45 AM Lovely, Richard. I enjoyed reading this to the max. Gave me a warm cozy feeling! :) Thanks for sharing! Richard Palmer November 24, 2012 at 10:43 AM you are welcome Eileen,thanks much

Sukmawati Komala November 18, 2012 at 11:14 PM hmm. this is so tasty ..good nite to you my dear poet..thank you for your great share..<3<3<3 Sk Richard Palmer November 19, 2012 at 7:23 AM THANKS SK,GREAT HAVING YOU FOR SUPPER LOL

Carol Eastman November 17, 2012 at 7:07 PM Loved reading this one. How do you get so many people to read your poetry? It's obviously good... But I couldn't find that many in a life time? Ps. When your done telling me... Please hand me some of what your eating. You made me hungry... LOL Richard Palmer November 19, 2012 at 7:22 AM read and comment on as much person poems as you can and from your material is good,you got a fan,hope it helps,thanks Carol

Phyllis Babcock November 17, 2012 at 2:12 PM Enjoyed reading this poem for it sounds like you have a sweet tooth too. Nothing better than coffee and cake before bed time. love phyl Richard Palmer November 17, 2012 at 2:20 PM thanks Phy,rabbit tooth lol

Debbie Guzzi November 15, 2012 at 6:09 PM so charming..sounds very homey! I have never been to Jamaica! LIght & Love Richard Palmer November 15, 2012 at 6:11 PM thanks Debbie,its about time

Gail Debole November 15, 2012 at 3:30 PM Hi Richard - I'm enjoying your tasty experience through your well-crafted poem. Have to keep those ants at bay! Thanks for sharing. - Gail Richard Palmer November 15, 2012 at 3:53 PM lol thanks Gail,yes we do lol

Michael J. Falotico November 12, 2012 at 10:38 AM Warm write my friend. Nothing short of heartwarming and of course now the whole soup is hungry while you sleep lol. Enjoyed my poet brother. Michael Richard Palmer November 13, 2012 at 3:32 PM thanks Michael,have enough for everyone,breakfast lol

David Nickle Read November 12, 2012 at 10:04 AM What a way to end the day man, I like your words, awesome flow. Read ;{> Richard Palmer November 13, 2012 at 3:31 PM thanks David

S.Jagathsimhan Nair November 12, 2012 at 8:07 AM Lucky I arrived at your supper time, Richard!! Jag Richard Palmer November 12, 2012 at 8:11 AM you are welcome JAG,have a slice bro

Lynn Dolly November 11, 2012 at 9:02 PM Hungry were you? :) I really want chocolate cake with icing now...thanks! hahaha. I dig~ Cheers, Sharon Richard Palmer November 12, 2012 at 5:26 AM thanks Sharon,come get a slice lol

Andrea Dietrich November 11, 2012 at 11:26 AM That sounds like a great tasty supper time. loved the read. yep, in my state we called it supper too. But here in Utah they call it dinner. Richard Palmer November 11, 2012 at 2:19 PM lol,thanks Andrea,dinner or supper,tasty treat

Elizabeth O'Driscoll November 11, 2012 at 5:45 AM enjoyed your wonderful poem Richard, love elizabeth Richard Palmer November 11, 2012 at 8:08 AM thanks much Elizabeth

Richard Lamoureux November 10, 2012 at 8:41 AM As I am reading your poem my wife is upstairs baking. Talk about special effects. Delicious poem Richard. Richard Lamoureux November 11, 2012 at 6:58 PM I had my cake and ate it, delicious. Richard Palmer November 10, 2012 at 11:41 AM lol so you have your own Mamma P,LOL,enjoy your cake Richard,thanks

Jack Ellison November 10, 2012 at 6:20 AM I'm drooling after reading this one... a scrumptious write! Cheers Richard Palmer November 10, 2012 at 11:30 AM mouth water running down your beard,lol,thanks Jack

Toquyen Harrell November 10, 2012 at 5:19 AM Lol, off to bed to you. Funny write, Richard. Your desserts sound yummy. Would love to have some chocolate cake right now :)) Love ya, Toquyen Richard Palmer November 10, 2012 at 10:00 AM sending a slice over girl,lol,thanks much Toquyen

Poet Destroyer A November 9, 2012 at 8:04 PM Richard, now I'm hungry... and my sweet tooth is acting up... , thank you for sharing your poem, always :-) PD Richard Palmer November 10, 2012 at 8:10 AM hush,lol,thanks PD

Sara Kendrick November 9, 2012 at 5:33 PM Ahhh...Fruit cake is delicious this time of year..Enjoyed reading this time of year..Thanks for stopping by..Sara..Glad to know that you are diversifying and trying new forms.. Richard Palmer November 10, 2012 at 8:02 AM yes I am Sara thank you oxox

Elizabeth Wesley November 9, 2012 at 2:59 PM You men and your tummies! It's been said the way to a man's heart is through his stomach. Can't argue that! Great for a smile Richard. Richard Palmer November 9, 2012 at 5:40 PM lol lol yes we are Elizabeth,thanks much

Carma Sanderson November 9, 2012 at 1:10 PM Your chocolate is Devine, Richie and made me hunger, mouth watering,fruit cake saturated with wine, i will take,waiting upon supper time, with a cup of coffee and fruit, plz Mamma P keep up the good bake, two thumbs up too a great piece having ice-cream, I say who can't have your cake and eat It too!!!,I loved it. And good night, don't let the Ants bite....... Lol Lol Richard Palmer November 9, 2012 at 5:37 PM THANKS CARMA,stepping on the ants lol Carma Sanderson November 9, 2012 at 2:18 PM Like SUGAR N' SPICE...

Anne-Lise Andresen November 9, 2012 at 12:19 PM ...... Now I got sweet ideas .... chocolate .. new boiled coffee .. chocolate .. new boiled coffee .. chocolate .... I love chocolate!!! Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise Richard Palmer November 9, 2012 at 5:30 PM lol sweet tooth Anne,thanks much dear

Carol Sunshine Brown November 9, 2012 at 12:19 PM A writer of all, a master of none but...I know when I read a poem if I have enjoyed it. Now I have read yours and I have indeed enjoyed it and your supper Richard. I wish you a wonderful weekend and hope you find much inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol Richard Palmer November 9, 2012 at 5:30 PM thanks Carol