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Supermoon Blues

There was this week a Supermoon
The sky lit by its color of burnt umber
I was eclipsed from this awesome sight
Racked and tired, I was in slumber.


written for contest:    10/1/15

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/10/2015 1:30:00 PM I really like how you did yours, personalizing it. for me it is NOT a bottom poem!! Login to Reply Dan Cwiak Date: 10/11/2015 9:28:00 PM Thanks, Andrea. When I read the other winners, I was suprised to see mine there at all.

Skat A Date: 10/9/2015 12:29:00 AM Dan, Congrats on your "Supermoon Eclipse win." Wuv **SKAT Login to Reply Dan Cwiak Date: 10/11/2015 9:26:00 PM "Tank yu" Skat. I wuv yur comments!

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/8/2015 3:06:00 PM Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Eclipses are awesome because they are rare like your work..Sara Login to Reply Dan Cwiak Date: 10/11/2015 9:25:00 PM Thanks, Sara. I am in good company when you say things like that, because I often feel eclipsed by their work...including yours.

Joseph May Date: 10/7/2015 6:38:00 PM Congrats on a fine win Dan Login to Reply Dan Cwiak Date: 10/11/2015 9:23:00 PM Thanks, Joseph. I appreciate your read and the comments.

Jan Allison Date: 10/7/2015 3:45:00 PM delightful rhyme Dan shame you missed it:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Dan Cwiak Date: 10/7/2015 5:22:00 PM Yes, and I had planned to see it. It'l be another 18 years before I get another chance. Hope I last that long. Thanks for the read and the comments.

Eve Roper Date: 10/7/2015 3:35:00 PM Dan, thank you so very much for participating in my contest and big congratulations on your win. Eve Login to Reply Dan Cwiak Date: 10/7/2015 5:19:00 PM Thanks, Eve. The one stanza had me stumped for a bit, but I wanted to get in an entry for something so extraordinary.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/5/2015 3:43:00 PM oh, you were like me. MIssing out on it!! Love how you did this. with the great imagery and rhyming. Login to Reply Dan Cwiak Date: 10/5/2015 4:27:00 PM Thanks Andrea. I knew I had to write something, it was the four line limit that made me so full of the blues.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/3/2015 3:02:00 PM - A wonderful moon poems, Dan !!! (7) - I wish you good luck for the contest ..... hope that your poems will win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Dan Cwiak Date: 10/3/2015 5:26:00 PM Thanks, Ann. I appreciate your comments very much.

Robert Lindley Date: 10/3/2015 2:19:00 PM An excellent use with words/message with double meaning. I too missed it by being wrapped up in composing a half dozen poems that night. Super 7 on this one and it gave me a smile. Always a good thing in my book.. Thanks Login to Reply Dan Cwiak Date: 10/3/2015 5:25:00 PM I smile when others do...Thanks for the comments.

Michael Tor Date: 10/1/2015 11:07:00 PM Dan enjoyed your read. Good luck with the contest. Login to Reply Dan Cwiak Date: 10/3/2015 5:24:00 PM Thanks, Michael. I appreciate the read.

CayCay Jennings Date: 10/1/2015 1:30:00 PM I tend to forget the rating box. Came back to lay a 7 on ya ... CayCay Login to Reply Dan Cwiak Date: 10/1/2015 7:43:00 PM Thanks for coming back so soon and for the rating. To say it in a different way...I willie, willie, appreciate it CayCay. lol

CayCay Jennings Date: 10/1/2015 1:29:00 PM This is my favorite. So clever, you were eclipsed - I love it, I willy, willy do ... CayCay Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 10/1/2015 12:02:00 PM ...I like how you used eclipsed in this piece Dan...Great write... Login to Reply Dan Cwiak Date: 10/1/2015 7:39:00 PM Thanks, Joseph. We try...