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Supermoon Blues

There was this week a Supermoon
The sky lit by its color of burnt umber
I was eclipsed from this awesome sight
Racked and tired, I was in slumber.


written for contest:    10/1/15

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Andrea Dietrich

October 10, 2015 at 1:30 PM

I really like how you did yours, personalizing it. for me it is NOT a bottom poem!!

Dan Cwiak

October 11, 2015 at 9:28 PM

Thanks, Andrea. When I read the other winners, I was suprised to see mine there at all.

Skat A

October 9, 2015 at 12:29 AM

Dan, Congrats on your "Supermoon Eclipse win." Wuv **SKAT

Dan Cwiak

October 11, 2015 at 9:26 PM

"Tank yu" Skat. I wuv yur comments!

Sara Kendrick

October 8, 2015 at 3:06 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Eclipses are awesome because they are rare like your work..Sara

Dan Cwiak

October 11, 2015 at 9:25 PM

Thanks, Sara. I am in good company when you say things like that, because I often feel eclipsed by their work...including yours.

Joseph May

October 7, 2015 at 6:38 PM

Congrats on a fine win Dan

Dan Cwiak

October 11, 2015 at 9:23 PM

Thanks, Joseph. I appreciate your read and the comments.

Jan Allison

October 7, 2015 at 3:45 PM

delightful rhyme Dan shame you missed it:-) hugs jan xx

Dan Cwiak

October 7, 2015 at 5:22 PM

Yes, and I had planned to see it. It'l be another 18 years before I get another chance. Hope I last that long. Thanks for the read and the comments.

Eve Roper

October 7, 2015 at 3:35 PM

Dan, thank you so very much for participating in my contest and big congratulations on your win. Eve

Dan Cwiak

October 7, 2015 at 5:19 PM

Thanks, Eve. The one stanza had me stumped for a bit, but I wanted to get in an entry for something so extraordinary.

Andrea Dietrich

October 5, 2015 at 3:43 PM

oh, you were like me. MIssing out on it!! Love how you did this. with the great imagery and rhyming.

Dan Cwiak

October 5, 2015 at 4:27 PM

Thanks Andrea. I knew I had to write something, it was the four line limit that made me so full of the blues.

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 3, 2015 at 3:02 PM

- A wonderful moon poems, Dan !!! (7) - I wish you good luck for the contest ..... hope that your poems will win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dan Cwiak

October 3, 2015 at 5:26 PM

Thanks, Ann. I appreciate your comments very much.

Robert Lindley

October 3, 2015 at 2:19 PM

An excellent use with words/message with double meaning. I too missed it by being wrapped up in composing a half dozen poems that night. Super 7 on this one and it gave me a smile. Always a good thing in my book.. Thanks

Dan Cwiak

October 3, 2015 at 5:25 PM

I smile when others do...Thanks for the comments.