superficial solace

  O river of moon roses
                ferry me home....
I weep in quivering quiescence 
      like a weathered wild petal~ 
  healing and hurting
            in my p o e t i c recluse..

perhaps there is no word
to depict your thunder-struck garden
as breathless stars
             shiver in solitude
tasting the pulse of betrayal
from the veins of grieving gravels…

I ponder ~ must I brush
     skin of dusk
with angst of dawn
believe in self-spun delusions,
and drown in dahlia deception?

I have known truth as a masked lie
    fed from familiar hands
                  of superficial solace...

I trusted the darker face of twilight
oblivious to the 
             sage flickering within...
following the fading silver
of the fickle Luna~
a willing mistress
            to ethereal torment…

             forgive me
I have no adjectives nor rhyme 
       left to right the love turned cold
I wove across
    hyacinth horizon 
that 
     feels not silent sighs
  remember 
      you'll search for my silhouette 
          in valleys of vain violets
             wicked-white winds 
  when the sun blemishes the sky
   with colors of 
                ice-blue
                         r e v e r i e s 
  O dream-weaver 
                           soul-kisser....
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Beaufort Avatar
March 30, 2025 at 3:10 PM
IE, to me this so strongly describes the kind of hurt that never goes away. A very tough kind of hurt to deal with. I could read it thinking the subject was a male or female...the way it's written could apply to anyone hurting. I also like the question you ask..."must I brush..." This indicates to me you know we do have some control over our grief. A very interesting subject and you give me and probably others a lot to think about. Smiles instead of frowns when possible!!
One Avatar
March 30, 2025 at 4:12 AM
I can feel your hurt in this poem... You hide behind metaphors but to me your angst and pain is so clear.... Not all gardeners are loyal and not all gardens are evergreen.... I loved your line "perhaps there is no word to depict your thunder-struck garden as breathless stars shiver in solitude tasting the pulse of betrayal from the veins of grieving gravels." I can feel the betrayal in your words... The important thing is not to put yourself in the same position again..
Bordner Avatar
March 28, 2025 at 3:37 PM
"O river of moon roses ferry me home..." the wounded body of your love has never been more expressive Poetess, such an extraordinary sight. Will the poetic recluse receive evacuated love righteously...this poem is like an enchanting allegorical Victorian painting to me. Has the soul kisser succumbed to love lost? "You'll search for my silhouette in valleys of vain violets..." a gorgeous threat...J.A.B. FAV!
Kendrick Avatar
March 27, 2025 at 4:32 AM
Way to go with this winner. It got it just right. Congratulations. Sara K
Lane Avatar
March 27, 2025 at 3:41 AM
"I ponder ~ must I brush skin of dusk with angst of dawn believe in self-spun delusions, and drown in dahlia deception?" No need to feel angst when the deception was not yours. It's not the sun that blemished the sky, but the color change of a chameleon. Let the dark one search for you, and in vain it shall be.
Williams Avatar
March 27, 2025 at 3:05 AM
Dearest Inky, This is an absolutely breathtaking piece, that you have woven. A tapestry of emotion and imagery that flows as effortlessly as the "river of moon roses" itself. The depth of sorrow and longing is palpable, each line dripping with poetic grace and aching beauty. A truly mesmerizing work, filled with the kind of haunting elegance that lingers long after reading. ...Hugs
Allison Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 2:50 PM
such and emotional piece oozing with sadness in every line Ink - dark and sad and the title certainly strikes a chord. hugs Jan x
Anaya Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 2:29 PM
"O dream-weaver soul-kisser." Like the song. That's so cool. it's metal day for me , I've got no more tears looped! Congratulations, Empress! O BTW if ever I steal a word I make sure ' Ink' is in the piece haha.
Onpaper Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 1:39 PM
river of moon roses ferry me home.. damn that opening ae papi!!! I weep in quivering quiescence .. a weathered wild petal healing and hurting.. breathless stars shiver in solitude … yaaaz gorgeous alliteration!!! must I brush skin of dusk with angst of dawn.. mmmmmm!!! The heaviness there !!! you'll search for my silhouette in valleys of vain violets… I search for it aeee in the corners of my eyes!! valleys of vain violets wicked-white winds … ooooo look that the beauty u create papi! Absolutely stunning
Rodgers Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 6:03 AM
Dear Empress, I thought how breathtakingly evocative, filled with raw emotion. I liked how the interplay of grief, betrayal, and resilience is mesmerizing. Empress, I read this several times and loved how the moonlit reflections and aching truths just seem to linger in the heart. Your poem transcends, offering beauty even in pain. Luminous artistry. Spring Blessings, my Dear Friend, Daniel
Empress Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 7:16 AM
Thank you for your kind soulful and empathetic response! Truly’ i appreciate always your poetic presence. Sending you light always
Andresen Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 2:24 AM
- Fed with lies which is the royal road to chaos ...the chaos forces of lies ... while reality becomes false ... - Life becomes a strenuous struggle to be something in the eyes of others - A deeply heartfelt poem, Ink - hugs
Empress Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 6:50 AM
What a profound comment that is dear anne lise! Thank you so very much truly
Cunningham Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 1:37 AM
Quite a lot of emotion in your verse IE, we always hope for solace when the odds are against us. Hope your week is going well. Tom
Empress Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 6:45 AM
Thank you so much dear Tom for your unwavering support always, im truly grateful for your kindness always
Rhymes Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 1:05 AM
Ferry me home ? I’m stealing that line
Empress Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 4:35 AM
For atleast admitting stealin lolol haha you are funny
Empress Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 4:34 AM
Awwn thank you dahlin
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