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It’s a chill and rainy Saturday night in New Haven - it’s Superbowl eve! My roommates Leong, Anna and Lisa and I were playing a game of Upwards - it’s a scrabble-like word game and we’re all strangely super competitive. My phone went “dunk!” A happy ‘Water jug’ sound messages make when they're from one of my favorites. The message was from Charles. He was at the front gate with a package that came to the house where Charles and Mrs. Charles live (about 600 yards from the dorm). He passed me the package through the bars at the main gate, “Thanks,” I said, “ga-night,” and he was gone. Back in my room, I ripped the box open like Christmas morning. The word game could wait - this package was from Paris. The light beige, Jacquemus, ‘Les Ballerines mary-jane pumps’ I’d ordered (forever ago) had arrived and they fit like soft leather gloves. “Ooo! Glampse!” Lisa pronounced. “Aren’t they?” I agreed, swiveling my hooves to show them off in the full length mirror. When I rejoined the Upwards game, talk had shifted to tomorrow's Superbowl. “I read yesterday that Taylor’s on her way (to the Superbowl)!” Leong declared. “I like that she likes the NFL now,” I said. “A lot of people hate her for it,” Anna countered. “She was on camera twice, for 11 seconds total, in a 3-1/2 hour long game. If that upsets you, you’re bringing a lot of your own baggage to the plot.” I updogged. Leong wants to order vegan “wings” for the SuperBowl. “What, exactly, are those?” I asked, apprehensively. “You’re the girl who talked me into trying buffalo-frog-legs in Paris? Ney?” Leong enquired, sarcastically. “Yeah,” I admitted, guiltily, “but they were delicious,” I said in self defense. I’m picking the Chiefs 30-20 over the niners. . . glampse = glamorous

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Date: 2/11/2024 11:07:00 AM
Is it my brain injury or do I detect a hint of sarcasm flipped with a pinch of spite? Does Charles test all your meals before you consume them?
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Chris Con
Date: 2/11/2024 3:11:00 PM
Your kisses taste like green olives and strawberry trubble gum. Your ex's write poetry that only a chosen few have access to.
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Anais Vionet
Date: 2/11/2024 12:49:00 PM
Me, sarcasm?? I’m shocked - SHOCKED I say! No (Charles), but only because I’m not giving away bites of my pizza. Would he have to bite every chicken wing? Wait, next you’ll be suggesting he pre-chew my gum and *gasp* kiss my dates first??
Date: 2/11/2024 5:37:00 AM
Rumour has it that Taylor's been logging in for some inspiration ... You're one of the hi-lights here. You might consider sharing your résumé with her sometime in the future.
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Anais Vionet
Date: 2/11/2024 6:25:00 AM
Oh, I’m sure she would be receptive, then it would be just ‘Tay’ and me - her closest friends, and we would be closest friends, probably call her ‘Tay,’ - we’d lay out by the pool and write.. stuff (trying to picture it). I’m a hi-light? Wow, Thank you ??

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