Super Master Dave

Master Dave
Was very brave 
And not ever prone to misbehave 
Never left his house without a shave 
Mounted his horse, gave his wife a wave 
Looked far and wide for a specific knave
Found him hiding deep inside a cave
Waived his mighty glaive, sent him to his grave
Many things Dave forgave
But never to hold another man slave
Bells in the distance much glory gave
Oops lunch is ready in the microwave 
For Super Master Dave



AP: Honorable Mention 2020
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Canerdy Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 2:26 PM
Line, you've taken the reader on a rollicking, entertaining ride--then to the microwave. I love it! Janice
Gauthier Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 3:00 PM
A short ride when all you have to do is close your eyes. LOL
Cunningham Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 6:35 AM
Sounds like a dashing gentleman Line. Lovely monorhyme that just flowed. Tom
Cunningham Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 2:06 PM
Sadly I don't own a horse but I've got a mountain bike, will that do lol
Gauthier Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 9:47 AM
Thanks, Tom. Much appreciated visit and comment. My next one should be entitled Super Tom... LOL
Wigley Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 2:38 AM
Well woven, Line, and for someone with an interest in things military, I'm ashamed to say I'd never heard of a Glaive. I learn something new every day, which is good. Thanks for that. Viv x
Gauthier Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 9:56 AM
It will be our little secret, Viv. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment.
Dietrich Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 12:36 AM
Cool rollicking fun, Line. ME really likes this.
Gauthier Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 9:56 AM
So cute. Thanks for the sweet visit and comment, Andrea.
Krutsinger Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 9:57 PM
Playful and fun to read. It's not easy to rhyme so steadily.
Gauthier Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 9:57 AM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Caren. Much appreciated.
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