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Super Master Dave

Master Dave Was very brave And not ever prone to misbehave Never left his house without a shave Mounted his horse, gave his wife a wave Looked far and wide for a specific knave Found him hiding deep inside a cave Waived his mighty glaive, sent him to his grave Many things Dave forgave But never to hold another man slave Bells in the distance much glory gave Oops lunch is ready in the microwave For Super Master Dave AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Posted in March, 2018

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/14/2018 2:26:00 PM

Line, you've taken the reader on a rollicking, entertaining ride--then to the microwave. I love it! Janice

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/14/2018 3:00:00 PM

A short ride when all you have to do is close your eyes. LOL

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/14/2018 6:35:00 AM

Sounds like a dashing gentleman Line. Lovely monorhyme that just flowed. Tom

Tom Cunningham
Date: 3/14/2018 2:06:00 PM

Sadly I don't own a horse but I've got a mountain bike, will that do lol

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/14/2018 9:47:00 AM

Thanks, Tom. Much appreciated visit and comment. My next one should be entitled Super Tom... LOL

Viv Wigley

Date: 3/14/2018 2:38:00 AM

Well woven, Line, and for someone with an interest in things military, I'm ashamed to say I'd never heard of a Glaive. I learn something new every day, which is good. Thanks for that. Viv x

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/14/2018 9:56:00 AM

It will be our little secret, Viv. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2018 12:36:00 AM

Cool rollicking fun, Line. ME really likes this.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/14/2018 9:56:00 AM

So cute. Thanks for the sweet visit and comment, Andrea.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/13/2018 9:57:00 PM

Playful and fun to read. It's not easy to rhyme so steadily.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/14/2018 9:57:00 AM

Thanks for your visit and comment, Caren. Much appreciated.