Kash Poet Poet Senryu

Super Mall

Super Mall
                                          even the mannequin kid
                                                taller than me




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Anindya Mohan Tagore February 23, 2016 at 3:20 AM LOL! Enjoyed it ....

Funom Makama December 17, 2015 at 4:11 AM lines with curves of wisdom and landscapes of awe! My mind is in a park of joy to how I manage selecting this page. Keep on writing dear poet and as always, a wonderful 7 without a doubt!

Bl Devnath May 17, 2015 at 1:52 PM Excellent piece like a gem in haiku form. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Funom Makama February 28, 2014 at 11:11 AM Absolutely brilliant. Thanks for making my day. I have found it pleasurable to always begin the weekend with Poetrysoup because poets like you and poems like this do not disappoint. Have a lovely weekend

Skat A February 26, 2014 at 8:47 PM Congratulations Kash, ~SKAT

Nette Onclaud February 21, 2014 at 4:12 PM you are no.1, kashi bud.. congrats!...huggs

Shadow Hamilton February 21, 2014 at 11:27 AM lol I love this Kash full of humour Hugs

Sara Kendrick February 21, 2014 at 10:01 AM Way to go..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta February 21, 2014 at 4:05 AM Lovely imagery penned and congrats on the fine win, kash

Andrea Dietrich February 20, 2014 at 10:14 PM I just knew Susan would love this. I think you and I know her taste very well, Kash!! She is one of a kind.

Connie Gildersleeve February 20, 2014 at 7:17 PM Fantastic imagery Kash. Congratulation on your win.

Robert Pettit February 20, 2014 at 9:47 AM I haven't seen you here in a long time. Congratulations on garnering the number one spot.

Andrea Dietrich January 24, 2014 at 9:23 PM gosh, can't believe I missed THIS one. You can tell how busy I have been to have not stopped by to see your latest one, Kash. This is superb! and great show of your humor!

Nette Onclaud January 24, 2014 at 2:35 PM this one is just super, kashi bud.. love the imagery!.. huggs

Poet Destroyer A January 14, 2014 at 11:59 AM Lol, I cannot picture this... love the super mall...xox..Linda

Chuck Melugin January 13, 2014 at 1:25 PM Made my day! Kash, you have a way with words! My best, chuck

Charmaine Chircop January 12, 2014 at 4:16 AM : ) Got me smiling dear kash...A very good one !!! Happy New Year : )

Anne-Lise Andresen January 11, 2014 at 1:24 PM :))) good one !!!!! // Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey January 11, 2014 at 10:23 AM Ha ha, this is a clever one my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem here this afternoon! What a pleasant and humorous piece, Great Work!!

Barbara Gorelick January 11, 2014 at 10:09 AM Good one Kash..hope all is well with you. BG