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Ring around crimson roses butterscotch sun comes around, lavishing mellow yellows upon lifestyles on the ground.

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Date: 9/11/2023 1:55:00 AM
So beautiful poetry, Evelyn, congratulations:)
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/11/2023 12:08:00 PM
Thank you for the pleasure of your comment, Jo. :)
Date: 9/10/2023 1:58:00 PM
What a fine cube with beautiful imagery. Congrats dear Evelyn! :)
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/10/2023 7:43:00 PM
I appreciate your warm remarks very much, my friend. :)
Date: 9/10/2023 1:10:00 PM
Your sunshine poem is wonderful Evelyn. Congratulations on your win.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/10/2023 1:20:00 PM
Thank you for your warm congratulations, my friend. :)
Date: 9/7/2023 2:22:00 PM
How lyrical is your cube poem. So beautiful and creative with such vivid imagery. Absolutely loved this. Especially “ butterscotch sun comes around” impeccable! Good luck for the contest
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/7/2023 4:06:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely remarks, which inspire and delight. :)
Date: 9/6/2023 12:22:00 PM
- Masterful poem with few words ... beautiful, Evelyn :) - hugs
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/6/2023 7:23:00 PM
Thank you for the sunshine and smiles, Anne-Lise. hugs :)
Date: 9/5/2023 3:01:00 PM
Nice writing, Evelyn. I like you pick for the image ... a red rose says a lot by itself. Have a joyful day, my friend. Bill
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/5/2023 11:18:00 PM
Your lovely remarks are so nice to read, Bill. Thank you very much.
Date: 9/5/2023 8:54:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this Evelyn. I thought when I read your first line it was a reference to the nursery rhyme "Ring-A- Ring-A- Roses". This is such a vibrant, descriptive piece. Cheers - Gary
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/5/2023 11:38:00 AM
Thank you for the joy of your comment, Gary. :)
Date: 9/5/2023 8:53:00 AM
Such a darling bright way to start my day. Perfect! Thank you.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/5/2023 11:36:00 AM
Thank you for your treasured comment. :)
Date: 9/5/2023 2:22:00 AM
Typical but excellent allusions to colour. Lovely cameo.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/5/2023 11:35:00 AM
Thank you for such a pleasant comment. :)
Date: 9/3/2023 11:15:00 AM
A lovely/colorful write. Love your crimson roses/butterscotch sun. Have a blessed/great day..............
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/3/2023 3:39:00 PM
Thank you for the delight of your comment, Paula. Have a blessed holiday. ;)
Date: 9/3/2023 8:48:00 AM
Such vivid imagery in only four words... wonderfully expressed..
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/3/2023 3:36:00 PM
I appreciate your thoughts so much, Silent One. :)
Date: 9/3/2023 5:34:00 AM
Butterscotch sun--lavishing mellow yellows--a lovely poem, Evelyn, in ornate vocabulary.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/3/2023 3:35:00 PM
Many thanks for the smiles, Vijay. :)
Date: 9/2/2023 4:59:00 PM
Rich with luscious colors. Yes, all for the benefit of us sentient ones who can appreciate the beauty. Have a great weekend Evelyn
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/3/2023 3:34:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely comment, Tom. Have a nice holiday. :)

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