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Sunshine of Our Lives

Ring around crimson roses butterscotch sun comes around, lavishing mellow yellows upon lifestyles on the ground.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Daniel Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 1:55 AM
So beautiful poetry, Evelyn, congratulations:)
Buehler Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 12:08 PM
Thank you for the pleasure of your comment, Jo. :)
Fowler Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 1:58 PM
What a fine cube with beautiful imagery. Congrats dear Evelyn! :)
Buehler Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 7:43 PM
I appreciate your warm remarks very much, my friend. :)
Volumes Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 1:10 PM
Your sunshine poem is wonderful Evelyn. Congratulations on your win.
Buehler Avatar
September 10, 2023 at 1:20 PM
Thank you for your warm congratulations, my friend. :)
Empress Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 2:22 PM
How lyrical is your cube poem. So beautiful and creative with such vivid imagery. Absolutely loved this. Especially “ butterscotch sun comes around” impeccable! Good luck for the contest
Buehler Avatar
September 7, 2023 at 4:06 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely remarks, which inspire and delight. :)
Andresen Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 12:22 PM
- Masterful poem with few words ... beautiful, Evelyn :) - hugs
Buehler Avatar
September 6, 2023 at 7:23 PM
Thank you for the sunshine and smiles, Anne-Lise. hugs :)
Baker Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 3:01 PM
Nice writing, Evelyn. I like you pick for the image ... a red rose says a lot by itself. Have a joyful day, my friend. Bill
Buehler Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 11:18 PM
Your lovely remarks are so nice to read, Bill. Thank you very much.
Radice Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 8:54 AM
I really enjoyed reading this Evelyn. I thought when I read your first line it was a reference to the nursery rhyme "Ring-A- Ring-A- Roses". This is such a vibrant, descriptive piece. Cheers - Gary
Buehler Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 11:38 AM
Thank you for the joy of your comment, Gary. :)
DiMino Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 8:53 AM
Such a darling bright way to start my day. Perfect! Thank you.
Buehler Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 11:36 AM
Thank you for your treasured comment. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 2:22 AM
Typical but excellent allusions to colour. Lovely cameo.
Buehler Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 11:35 AM
Thank you for such a pleasant comment. :)
Goldsmith Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 11:15 AM
A lovely/colorful write. Love your crimson roses/butterscotch sun. Have a blessed/great day..............
Buehler Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 3:39 PM
Thank you for the delight of your comment, Paula. Have a blessed holiday. ;)
One Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 8:48 AM
Such vivid imagery in only four words... wonderfully expressed..
Buehler Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 3:36 PM
I appreciate your thoughts so much, Silent One. :)
Pandit Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 5:34 AM
Butterscotch sun--lavishing mellow yellows--a lovely poem, Evelyn, in ornate vocabulary.
Buehler Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 3:35 PM
Many thanks for the smiles, Vijay. :)
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